Hello Lirah,
학생이 쓴 원문
How are you today? I’m doing well.
As I told you, I love the kind of detective stories. When I was young, I read a lot of novels of Agatha Christie and Conan Doyle. At that time I read a same novel several times over. Nowadays I often watch American Detective Dramas, CSI series, Criminal Mind, NCIS, Castle etc. Because those kinds of things are so much fun, once I watch them, I can’t stop it. I think most stories are good but many scenes are brutal. That’s why those kinds of drama are addictive.
Several days ago, I watched one of Criminal Mind series, so I was deeply impressed about the story. I’m not sure that if it happens to me I could do that.
Next day I would like tell you about this story. Have a nice day.
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
I love reading too. I started reading novels when I was young. However, I'd rather read hostorical romance novels. I like this kind of stories because I can go back to the past and see what they have been doing. Their world in the past is totally different from our modern world and that fact alone intrigues me.
On the other hand, I watch thrilling movies too. I think I have watched a series or two of these American TV series you mentioned. Especially if it is action, I probably have watched it! I can't wait for you to tell me about the story, but I will be patient. I'm going to wait for your story!
See you soon. Have a wonderful week end!
Sincerely yours,T. Lirah How are you today? I’m doing well. >>Correct.As I told you, I love the kind of detective stories. >>As I told you, I love detective stories. When I was young, I read a lot of novels of Agatha Christie and Conan Doyle. >>When I was young, I read lots of novels of Agatha Christie and Conan Doyle. At that time I read a same novel several times over. >>At that time I read the same novel several times over and over. Nowadays I often watch American Detective Dramas, CSI series, Criminal Mind, NCIS, Castle etc. >>Nowadays I often watch American Detective Dramas like CSI series, Criminal Mind, NCIS, Castle etc. Because those kinds of things are so much fun, once I watch them, I can’t stop it. >>These kinds of things are so much fun, once I watch them, I can’t stop it. I think most stories are good but many scenes are brutal. >>Correct.That’s why those kinds of drama are addictive.>>That’s why these kinds of drama are addictive.Several days ago, I watched one of Criminal Mind series, so I was deeply impressed about the story. >>Several days ago, I watched one Criminal Mind series and I was deeply impressed about the story. I’m not sure that if it happens to me I could do that. >>I’m not sure if that happens to me I could do the same thing.Next day I would like tell you about this story. Have a nice day. >>Next day I would like to tell you about this story. Have a nice day.
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