Hello Lirah,
학생이 쓴 원문
From Sunday, I thought about my ability all the time.
To tell the truth, my friend who I met on Sunday is a special partner for English practice. She's also a foreign student. So, she's helping me practice speaking English. We made a rule that I have to use only English when we meet. Before meeting I had confidence and I thought my skill was improved little bit. However, it disappeared soon after meeting. Even though she spoke easily, I was so busy for hearing only and understanding her that I couldn't speak at all. Oh, my god! I felt terrible after that.
During the morning lesson, I couldn't make a following sentence, “I'm not sure what will I do in the future.” I used how instead what. Like this, I often confuse how and what. Also, there are many mistakes like this.
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
I think you should have to increase your initiative in responding to your friend so that you will have the chance to talk as well. Communication means two way talking, so if your friend is talking you have to listen but if you are talking your friend have to listen too. You have to ask questions and you have to be more energetic in talking to your friend so that you will have an equal chance to speak in English. You have to quickly give the appropriate response to what she is telling you then start talking. For example:
Friend: You know what Julie, the weather today is really nice and it makes me feel great. I like the temperature it's not too hot it's not too cold. It is just moderate and I am enjoying it very much! ......................(She will keep on talking and talking if you will not cut her off)
You: Wow! I feel the same way, I think the weather today is perfect! I thought I am the only one who likes this kind of weather. How about the weather in your country? Can you tell me more about it? ............. (Then you will have the chance to talk)
Write down 5 questions that you want to know about your friend in here and the I'll check it for you. Good luck! I know you can do it!
Sincerely yours,Lirah
From Sunday, I thought about my ability all the time. >>From Sunday, I continuously thought about my ability all the time. >>From Sunday, I started thinking about my English ability all the time. -- betterTo tell the truth, my friend who I met on Sunday is a special partner for English practice. >>To tell the truth, my friend who I met last Sunday is a special partner for me to practice English conversation.She's also a foreign student. So, she's helping me practice speaking English. >>She's also a foreign student. So, she's helping me to practice my English speaking skill. We made a rule that I have to use only English when we meet. >>We made a rule that I only have to use English when we meet. -- better Before meeting I had confidence and I thought my skill was improved little bit. >>Before meeting her I had confidence and I thought my skill has improved a little bit. However, it disappeared soon after meeting.>>However, my confidence disappeared soon after meeting her.Even though she spoke easily, I was so busy for hearing only and understanding her that I couldn't speak at all. >>Even though she spoke easily, I was so busy listening and trying to understand her that I couldn't speak at all. Oh, my god! I felt terrible after that. >>CorrectDuring the morning lesson, I couldn't make a following sentence, “I'm not sure what will I do in the future.” >>During the morning lesson, I couldn't even make the following sentences like “I'm not sure what to do in the future.” I used how instead what. Like this, I often confuse how and what. Also, there are many mistakes like this. >>I used how instead of what. Like this instance, I'm often confused between how and what. Also, I make many mistakes similar to this.
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