Hello Lirah,
학생이 쓴 원문
How’s going?
Actually, I have written a composition to upload yesterday and I tried to upload it this morning. But I forgot it and just went out home. Today I’ll stay up late in school. Therefore it’ll be too late to upload it after going back home. And I gave up memorizing it so I’m rewriting an English composition. Ha-ha
Today, my friend who has majored in Residence environmentology suggested participating together in a student design competition. It looks related to my study and it may be helpful to my career.
We made a decision to challenge that competition even if I know it’ll be tough time to manage both a studio class and a competition.
I hope to experience many things as possible to be unable to do in work place.
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
I waited for your composition yesterday but I wasn't able to get it on time. Anyway, you made the right decision by joining the competition because it will be very helpful for your exposure and for your career. We join a competition to win or we join a competition just for fun! What ever reason you have for joining the competition, I wish you good luck!
Sincerely,Lirah
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