Hello Lirah,

2010-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 kaycee

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As I told you, I couldn't walk normally because the muscles in my legs were so sore whenever I move. These days I can feel the sun rises earlier. When we just started lessons, I was hard to get up at 7 AM. You know what, whenever I get a sleep late, I seriously considered delaying a next lesson. But thanks to you, now a lesson is enjoyable and I'm looking forward to it. By the way, you corrected my wrong composition the day before yesterday; I arrived in there earlier than others so nothing's happening yet. Actually I wanted to say that what I arrived on time is really rare. It seems that your correction is different meaning what was intended. Please check it again. Well, do you know Jason Mraz, a musician of UK?

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Dear [Name],   The composition that seems to be misunderstood, is it about your mountain climbing activity? I rechecked it and changed the first part of the composition. I thought maybe the timing was not right. Anyway, I hope you will feel better sooner. You should have had a massage and a warm bath to make you feet better.   I'm glad you are enjoying our classes this days. I also feel the same way and I am always looking forward to see your compositions. Yeah, I know Jason Mraz, I heard some of his songs. I think he is not from UK though, I think he is from the United States. Do you like his songs?   Sincerely,Lirah     As I told you, I couldn't walk normally because the muscles in my legs were so sore whenever I move. >>CorrectThese days I can feel the sun rises earlier. >>These days I can feel that the sun rises earlier. When we just started lessons, I was hard to get up at 7 AM. >>When we just started our lessons, it was hard for me to get up at 7 AM. You know what, whenever I get a sleep late, I seriously considered delaying a next lesson. >>You know what, whenever I go to bed late, I seriously considered delaying the next lesson.But thanks to you, now a lesson is enjoyable and I'm looking forward to it. >>But thanks to you, now our lessons are enjoyable and I'm looking forward to it. By the way, you corrected my wrong composition the day before yesterday;>>Correct I arrived in there earlier than others so nothing's happening yet. Actually I wanted to say that what I arrived on time is really rare. >>Actually what I wanted to say is that "Arriving in there earlier than the others is not usual for me." or "I don't usually arrive at a meeting place earlier than the others." or "I don't usually arrive at a meeting place on time."It seems that your correction is different meaning what was intended. Please check it again.>>It seems that your correction is different from the intended meaning . Please check it again.Well, do you know Jason Mraz, a musician of UK? >>Well, do you know Jason Mraz, a musician from UK? >>Well, do you know Jason Mraz, a musician in UK?

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