Hello Lirah,
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning. I'm still in school. Yesterday I couldn't go back home.
I didn't finish my assignment for a tomorrow's presentation. So I stayed up all night in lab. Oh, there is one more reason. Actually, I couldn't work at home because my laptop is about to break.
Oops! It is morning. I have done the work. I'll go back home after finishing a composition. Even if I don't feel clear-headed, I'll try to do my best in the lesson.
Yesterday the weather was really wonderful. I went to the Roppongi, which is downtown in Tokyo, to participate in a lesson of Japanese traditional ribbon tying. I was so sad I couldn't help coming back school. I ran into my lab's mate who comes from Philippines while going there. He was also going to go to participate in the same one. What a surprise!
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
I can see that you really tried your best in class today. Sometimes we have to do lots of sacrifices for a brighter future. Wow, I think Japanese ribbon tying is quite interesting! There are so many interesting traditons of Japan that still fascinates the world. Anyway, I hope you will have some time later today to take a rest! Have a nice week end!
Sincerely,Lirah
Good morning. I'm still in school. >>Good morning, I'm still in school. Yesterday I couldn't go back home. I didn't finish my assignment for a tomorrow's presentation. So I stayed up all night in lab. >>Yesterday I couldn't go back home because I didn't finish my assignment for tomorrow's presentation. So I stayed up all night in the laboratory. Oh, there is one more reason. Actually, I couldn't work at home because my laptop is about to break. >>CorrectOops! It is morning. I have done the work. I'll go back home after finishing a composition. >>Oops! It is already morning. I have done the work and I'll go back home after finishing this composition. Even if I don't feel clear-headed, I'll try to do my best in the lesson.>>Even if I don't feel clear-headed, I'll try to do my best in our class today.Yesterday the weather was really wonderful. >>CorrectI went to the Roppongi, which is downtown in Tokyo, to participate in a lesson of Japanese traditional ribbon tying.>>I went to Roppongi, which is located in downtown Tokyo, to participate in a lesson of Japanese traditional ribbon tying.I was so sad I couldn't help coming back school. I ran into my lab's mate who comes from Philippines while going there. >>I was so sad I couldn't help coming back to school. I ran into my lab mate who came from the Philippines while I'm on my way to Roppongi. He was also going to go to participate in the same one. What a surprise! >>He is also going to participate in the traditional ribbon tying. What a surprise!
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