hello Lorraine!

2011-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

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hello again. thanks for listning to my rants today. if i can have superpower i would like to have invisibility. i would sneak around supervisor and i will kick her ass. also, i will stocking someone, if i have crucs on a guy. isn't it spooky? i think so :) talk you tomorrow and thanks for always being nice to me ;)

강사 첨삭

Howdy [이름]! You never fail to make me laugh on your hilarious antics. :D The thought of having the power of invisibility is just awesome. I would love to have that one too! Thank you also for being a wonderful student! Though your voice sounds to be in a hurry at times (because you\'re on your way to work during our class), you still give your best to participate in the discussion. Anyway, I\'m hoping that you will continue to write something in your composition board. I made some corrections in your message. Please take a look and study: hello again. thanks for listning to my rants today.>> Hello again! Thanks for listening to my rants today. (Punctuation mark, Spelling, Capitalization) if i can have superpower i would like to have invisibility. >>If I can have a super power, I would like to have invisibility. (Use of Article, Punctuation mark, Capitalization) i would sneak around supervisor and i will kick her ass.>> I would sneak around the supervisor and I will kick her ass. (Use of Article, Capitalization)also, i will stocking someone, if i have crucs on a guy. >> Also, if there\'s a certain guy whom I have a crush on, I will stalk him! (Sentence Construction, Spelling) isn\'t it spooky? i think so :)>> Correct! Fantastic! :) OR YOU CAN SAY >> Isn\'t that spooky? I think so. :) (Capitalization, Punctuation mark)talk you tomorrow and thanks for always being nice to me ;) >> I\'ll talk to you tomorrow and thank you for always being so nice to me. (Missing word, Punctuation mark)   Please take care of yourself and see you tomorrow. Have a great day my dear!  ~Teacher Lorraine ^^,

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