Hello! Louise!

2011-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

It's rainning now.I miss the sunny weather very much. Tomorrow early morning we are leaving home,so I have to prepare something for our vacation and go to sleep tonight.I won't be able to listen to today' and tomorrow's classes.I wish it will not rain tomorrow.^^Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!! Thank you for your composition today. Please be guided by the corrections below. It's rainning now.I miss the sunny weather very much. >> It's raining now. I miss the sunny weather so much.Tomorrow early morning we are leaving home,so I have to prepare something for our vacation and go to sleep tonight. >> Tomorrow early morning, we'll be leaving home, so I have to prepare something for our vacation and go to sleep early tonight.I won't be able to listen to today' and tomorrow's classes. >> I won't be able to attend our class today and tomorrow. I wish it will not rain tomorrow.^^Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday. >> I wish it will not rain tomorrow. ^^ Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday.

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