Hello~Louise :D
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello~Louise~ I'm your student, [이름] ^^
I'm so happy studying English with you.
Actually,I've been studying English to get Australia immigration visa.
I need to score 7.0 (each band) at IELTS .
Although I'm still not capable, I'll do my best with my efforts.
Good night,Louise
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for the compliment. I am also happy of having you as my student. Don’t worry, I’ll help you with your IELTS, okay? I’ll be with you. See you tomorrow, [이름]!
-T. Louise
Hello~Louise~
>> Hello, Louise.
I'm your student, [이름] ^^
>> Correct.
>> I'm your student, [이름]. ^^
I'm so happy studying English with you.
>> Correct.Actually,I've been studying English to get Australia immigration visa.
>> Actually, I've been studying English to get Australia immigration visa.I need to score 7.0 (each band) at IELTS.
>> Correct.Although I'm still not capable, I'll do my best with my efforts.
>> Correct.Good night,Louise
>> Correct.
>> Good night, Louise.
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