Hello~Louise :D

2011-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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Hello~Louise~ I'm your student, [이름] ^^ I'm so happy studying English with you. Actually,I've been studying English to get Australia immigration visa. I need to score 7.0 (each band) at IELTS . Although I'm still not capable, I'll do my best with my efforts. Good night,Louise

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Thank you for the compliment. I am also happy of having you as my student. Don’t worry, I’ll help you with your IELTS, okay? I’ll be with you. See you tomorrow, [이름]! -T. Louise Hello~Louise~ >> Hello, Louise.  I'm your student, [이름] ^^ >> Correct. >> I'm your student, [이름]. ^^ I'm so happy studying English with you. >> Correct.Actually,I've been studying English to get Australia immigration visa. >> Actually, I've been studying English to get Australia immigration visa.I need to score 7.0 (each band) at IELTS. >> Correct.Although I'm still not capable, I'll do my best with my efforts. >> Correct.Good night,Louise >> Correct. >> Good night, Louise.  

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