Hello Maria,

2013-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Maria

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Hello Maria, It's an awesome Friday. I am looking forward to hearing your voice. Please don't think that I am good at paying lip service. I am a serious man. How is it going? Is there anything exciting? Sometimes I think my job is a monotonous work. I just doing the same job routinely. I am stuck on the chair for a whole day. I am just looking at the monitor without losing my mind. Can you image What I look like? It's depending on your imagination. I did the homework. The answers from 1 to 10 are that Audience, For, Besides, Rise, Title, Effect, Lay, Recipe, Inspected and By. I hope all of them is correct. Do you like eating sweetpotatos? I love it because it's so sweet and delicious. As I told you before, I want to earn some weight so the sweet potato helps me to put on my weight. I hope it works out. I drank too much last night. I am ok in the moring but now I am too sleepy and tired. Just holding on 1 hour, I could get out of the office. please wake me up. BR J

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Hi there!!!     A pleasant afternoon to you. I hope you would do good in your TOEIC exam. Perfect it okay.     Yap, you were almost perfect in your homework just check numbers 4 and 5. Number 4. raise 5. headline...     Have a pleasant weekend. I am hoping that the weather here will become better. I heard that there\'s another typhoon coming so I have to prepare for that. See you on Monday. Take care.   ~T.Maria~   Hello Maria, >> CorrectIt\'s an awesome Friday. I am looking forward to hearing your voice. Please don\'t think that I am good at paying lip service. I am a serious man. How is it going? Is there anything exciting? >> Correct Sometimes I think my job is a monotonous work. >> Sometimes I think that my job is a monotonous work. I just doing the same job routinely. >> I just do the same job routinely. I am stuck on the chair for a whole day. I am just looking at the monitor without losing my mind. >> Correct Can you image What I look like? >> Correct  It\'s depending on your imagination. >> It depends on your imagination.I did the homework. The answers from 1 to 10 are that Audience, For, Besides, Rise, Title, Effect, Lay, Recipe, Inspected and By. >> Correct I hope all of them is correct. >> I hope all of them are correct. Do you like eating sweetpotatos? >> Do you like eating sweetpotatoes? I love it because it\'s so sweet and delicious. >> Correct As I told you before, I want to earn some weight so the sweet potato helps me to put on my weight.                                                                                              >>potatoes help... >> As I told you before, I want to earn some weight so the sweet potatoes help me to put on more weight. I hope it works out.            >> Correct                                                       I drank too much last night. >> Correct      I am ok in the moring but now I am too sleepy and tired. >> I was okay in the morning but now I am too sleepy and tired. Just holding on 1 hour, I could get out of the office. >> I am just holding on for 1 hour before I could get out of the office. please wake me up. >> Please wake me up.BR >> Best RegardsJ >> [이름]     

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