Hello Maria,
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Maria,
It's an awesome Friday. I am looking forward to hearing your voice. Please don't think that I am good at paying lip service. I am a serious man. How is it going? Is there anything exciting? Sometimes I think my job is a monotonous work. I just doing the same job routinely. I am stuck on the chair for a whole day. I am just looking at the monitor without losing my mind. Can you image What I look like? It's depending on your imagination.
I did the homework. The answers from 1 to 10 are that Audience, For, Besides, Rise, Title, Effect, Lay, Recipe, Inspected and By. I hope all of them is correct.
Do you like eating sweetpotatos? I love it because it's so sweet and delicious. As I told you before, I want to earn some weight so the sweet potato helps me to put on my weight. I hope it works out.
I drank too much last night. I am ok in the moring but now I am too sleepy and tired. Just holding on 1 hour, I could get out of the office. please wake me up.
BR
J
강사 첨삭
Hi there!!!
A pleasant afternoon to you. I hope you would do good in your TOEIC exam.
Perfect it okay.
Yap, you were almost perfect in your homework just check numbers 4 and 5.
Number 4. raise 5. headline...
Have a pleasant weekend. I am hoping that the weather here will become better.
I heard that there\'s another typhoon coming so I have to prepare for that.
See you on Monday. Take care.
~T.Maria~
Hello Maria,
>> CorrectIt\'s an awesome Friday. I am looking forward to hearing your voice. Please don\'t think that I am good at paying lip service. I am a serious man. How is it going? Is there anything exciting?
>> Correct
Sometimes I think my job is a monotonous work.
>> Sometimes I think that my job is a monotonous work.
I just doing the same job routinely.
>> I just do the same job routinely.
I am stuck on the chair for a whole day. I am just looking at the monitor without losing my mind.
>> Correct
Can you image What I look like?
>> Correct
It\'s depending on your imagination.
>> It depends on your imagination.I did the homework. The answers from 1 to 10 are that Audience, For, Besides, Rise, Title, Effect, Lay, Recipe, Inspected and By.
>> Correct
I hope all of them is correct.
>> I hope all of them are correct. Do you like eating sweetpotatos?
>> Do you like eating sweetpotatoes?
I love it because it\'s so sweet and delicious.
>> Correct
As I told you before, I want to earn some weight so the sweet potato helps me to put on my weight.
>>potatoes help...
>> As I told you before, I want to earn some weight so the sweet potatoes help me to put on more weight.
I hope it works out.
>> Correct I drank too much last night.
>> Correct
I am ok in the moring but now I am too sleepy and tired.
>> I was okay in the morning but now I am too sleepy and tired.
Just holding on 1 hour, I could get out of the office.
>> I am just holding on for 1 hour before I could get out of the office.
please wake me up.
>> Please wake me up.BR
>> Best RegardsJ
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