Hello Maria,

Hello Maria, It's a cool day. I like this weather because it is not too hot and too cold. It is perfect to walking around. What is the one feature I would change about myself and why? I easily feel bored when I learn a new thing. I need to be patiet. Could you check the sentences below? I went on a picnic with my family. We bought fried rice with vegetables for lunch. It looks fantastic. Fried rice with vegetables has lots of colours such as white onions, red carrots, green beans, yellow peppers. Different colours make a great harmony. It tastes sweet and a little bit spicy. Two kinds of taste makes me happier. It goess well with Kimchi. I had a great time with an amazing lunch. There are benefits as well as drawbacks of using the internet. First of all, building a social contract with foreign friends because there is no a barriar in the internet all around the world. Moreover, Regardless of places, I can access internet where I am. See you in few hours.

Hi there!!!     A pleasant afternoon. I think you have a vacant time today. Thanks for sending your composition. The spelling of \"colour\" is correct but it is better to use this one \"color\". You also mentioned that \" There are benefits as well as drawbacks of using the internet.\" so aside from mentioning the benefits you also have to tell some of the drawbacks unless of course the question is asking for the benefits alone. See you. Take care.   ~T.Maria~   Hello Maria, >> CorrectIt\'s a cool day. >> Correct I like this weather because it is not too hot and too cold. >> I like this weather because it is not too hot and not too cold.                                                                   It is perfect to walking around. >> It is perfect to walk around.   What is the one feature I would change about myself and why?   I easily feel bored when I learn a new thing. >> Correct I need to be patiet. >> I need to be patient.Could you check the sentences below? I went on a picnic with my family. We bought fried rice with vegetables for lunch. It looks fantastic. Fried rice with vegetables has lots of colours such as white onions, red carrots, green beans, yellow peppers. Different colours make a great harmony. It tastes sweet and a little bit spicy. Two kinds of taste makes me happier. It goess well with Kimchi. >> Correct               >>goes   I had a great time with an amazing lunch. >> OR: I had a great time and I had an amazing lunch. There are benefits as well as drawbacks of using the internet. >> Correct  First of all, building a social contract with foreign friends because there is no a barriar in the internet all around the world. >> One benefit of it is building a social contact with foreign friends because there is no internet barrier all over the world.   Moreover, Regardless of places, I can access internet where I am. >> Moreover, regardless of the place, I can access the internet wherever I am. See you in few hours. >> Correct