hello marie

2012-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello. Marie~ Yesterday, You said very nice my voice, i wasn't listen your it. so i say thank you. i present job is a professional soldier and a captain. but i leave after three months. i don't have english talking time with the other soilder. i chose David in my english name. your advice was helped for me in choice english name. thank you. And i don't want education of toeic speaking. i want free talking education. homework1 i experience conniption when my friend make fun of me. homework2 i want to enter a big company. because i finished a captain soon. So i do telephone english, i will have toeic speaking high score.

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Hi David! You chose a wonderful name. I like it. Thank you for doing your homework! Good job! I hope you enjoyed our class. Good night! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello. Marie~ >> correct OR >> Hello, Marie!Yesterday, You said very nice my voice, i wasn\'t listen your it. >> Today you said my voice sounds nice and I didn\'t hear you well when you said that.so i say thank you. >> So I want to say \'thank you\' for that.i present job is a professional soldier and a captain. >> I\'m currently working as a soldier and I am a Captain.but i leave after three months. >> But I will leave this job after three months.i don\'t have english talking time with the other soilder. >> I don\'t have an English name yet.i chose David in my english name. >> I choose David as my English name.your advice was helped for me in choice english name. >> Your advice was helpful for me in choosing my English name. thank you. >> correct OR >> Thank you. - Proper capitalization. ^^And i don\'t want education of toeic speaking. i want free talking education.>> I don\'t want to study TOEIC Speaking. I want to have a free talking class.homework1 >> correcti experience conniption when my friend make fun of me.>> I experience a conniption whenever my friend makes fun of me.homework2 >> correcti want to enter a big company. >> correct OR >> I want to enter a big company. because i finished a captain soon. >> Because I won\'t be a Captain in the army anymore.So i do telephone english, i will have toeic speaking high score. >> So I enrolled in telephone English to get a high score in the TOEIC test.

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