hello marie
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello. Marie~
Yesterday, You said very nice my voice, i wasn't listen your it.
so i say thank you.
i present job is a professional soldier and a captain.
but i leave after three months.
i don't have english talking time with the other soilder.
i chose David in my english name.
your advice was helped for me in choice english name. thank you.
And i don't want education of toeic speaking. i want free talking education.
homework1
i experience conniption when my friend make fun of me.
homework2
i want to enter a big company. because i finished a captain soon.
So i do telephone english, i will have toeic speaking high score.
강사 첨삭
Hi David! You chose a wonderful name. I like it. Thank you for doing your homework! Good job! I hope you enjoyed our class. Good night! CIAO!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello. Marie~
>> correct
OR >> Hello, Marie!Yesterday, You said very nice my voice, i wasn\'t listen your it.
>> Today you said my voice sounds nice and I didn\'t hear you well when you said that.so i say thank you.
>> So I want to say \'thank you\' for that.i present job is a professional soldier and a captain.
>> I\'m currently working as a soldier and I am a Captain.but i leave after three months.
>> But I will leave this job after three months.i don\'t have english talking time with the other soilder.
>> I don\'t have an English name yet.i chose David in my english name.
>> I choose David as my English name.your advice was helped for me in choice english name.
>> Your advice was helpful for me in choosing my English name.
thank you.
>> correct
OR >> Thank you. - Proper capitalization. ^^And i don\'t want education of toeic speaking. i want free talking education.>> I don\'t want to study TOEIC Speaking. I want to have a free talking class.homework1
>> correcti experience conniption when my friend make fun of me.>> I experience a conniption whenever my friend makes fun of me.homework2
>> correcti want to enter a big company.
>> correct
OR >> I want to enter a big company.
because i finished a captain soon.
>> Because I won\'t be a Captain in the army anymore.So i do telephone english, i will have toeic speaking high score.
>> So I enrolled in telephone English to get a high score in the TOEIC test.
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