HELLO MAYLEEN

2017-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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What are your greatest professional strengths? I'm good with people even if they are foreigner. I worked in Vietnam for a year. While at my previous work , my people really liked me. I know how to make people feel comfortable. I always try to respect them. Although they were afriad of other managers, they belived in me. I think such my strength will help your company -------------------------------------------------------- I think my answers is not "professional" things.. But I've not decided yet what company or what position I want to get a job.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!^^   Thank you so much for this composition. It is okay. You were able to emphasize you trait as a good communicator. But like what I told you last time, your professional strengths should be related to the piosition you\'re applying for. Keep that in mind. See you on Friday!^-^   _T. Mayleen :)   I\'m good with people even if they are foreigner.>> I\'m good at communicating with people even if they are foreigners.I worked in Vietnam for a year. >> Correct!While at my previous work , my people really liked me. >> My coworkers in my previous work really liked me.I know how to make people feel comfortable. >> Correct!I always try to respect them. >> I try to always respect themAlthough they were afriad of other managers, they belived in me. >> Although they were afraid of the other managers, they believed in me.I think such my strength will help your company >> I think those strengths will make me helpful to your company.I think my answers is not \"professional\" things.. >> I think my answers are not \'professional\' strengths.But I\'ve not decided yet what company or what position I want to get a job. >> But I haven\'t decided yet on which comapny and what position I\'d apply for.

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