HELLO MAYLEEN
학생이 쓴 원문
What are your greatest professional strengths?
I'm good with people even if they are foreigner.
I worked in Vietnam for a year.
While at my previous work , my people really liked me.
I know how to make people feel comfortable.
I always try to respect them.
Although they were afriad of other managers, they belived in me.
I think such my strength will help your company
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I think my answers is not "professional" things..
But I've not decided yet what company or what position I want to get a job.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^^
Thank you so much for this composition.
It is okay. You were able to emphasize you trait as a good communicator.
But like what I told you last time, your professional strengths should be related to the piosition you\'re applying for.
Keep that in mind. See you on Friday!^-^
_T. Mayleen :)
I\'m good with people even if they are foreigner.>> I\'m good at communicating with people even if they are foreigners.I worked in Vietnam for a year.
>> Correct!While at my previous work , my people really liked me.
>> My coworkers in my previous work really liked me.I know how to make people feel comfortable.
>> Correct!I always try to respect them.
>> I try to always respect themAlthough they were afriad of other managers, they belived in me.
>> Although they were afraid of the other managers, they believed in me.I think such my strength will help your company
>> I think those strengths will make me helpful to your company.I think my answers is not \"professional\" things..
>> I think my answers are not \'professional\' strengths.But I\'ve not decided yet what company or what position I want to get a job.
>> But I haven\'t decided yet on which comapny and what position I\'d apply for.
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