Hello Miss. [Name]! Happy Wednesday! To help you improve your fluency, try writing something based on ne
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I have a short plan of one day or a week. The long plan is months and years.Happiness comes when I achieve my plan,
and I don\'t know how it will change.However, I will try to be happy. Every day, every week, every month, and every year ~
Happiness is making. And it comes to thinking.I think I am happy today, and if I want to spend a day, a week, a month, a year and a happy life.This is my pure thought.
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Hello Miss. [Name]! Happiness depends on the person. I think that it\'s not possible to be happy all the time that is why we have to cherish the moments we feel happy. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
>>I have short plans for one day or a week.
The long plan is months and years. Happiness comes when I achieve my plan.
>>My long plans take months and years to be fulfilled. Happiness comes when I achieve my plan.
and I don\'t know how it will change. However, I will try to be happy.
and I don\'t know how it will change. However, I will try to be happy.
>>And, I don\'t know if it will change. Nevertheless, I will still try to be happy.
Every day, every week, every month, and every year ~~Happiness is making.
>>Every day, every week, every month, and every year we strive to be happy.
And it comes to thinking.
>>It\'s all in our thoughts.
I think I am happy today, and if I want to spend a day, a week, a month, a year and a happy life.
>>I think I am happy today, and if I want to spend a day, a week, a month, a year happy as I live my life.
This is my pure thought.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: This is my honest thought.
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