Hello, Monica

2010-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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It's been a while, isn't it? As I have said before, I am preparing for the Toefl so that I requested to postpone the class. We will be having a class on November or maybe, December I hope to take your kind teaching as early as possible.^^ we don't have class for a while but i will keep my comoposition up on the message board,and thus I need your contiuous attention Getting beack to the point, please make sureif the following sentences are correct Hug – when I get back from work, exhausted and tired, my mother’s hug is a great help to overcome my tiredness Puppy – a puppy in my house always welcome me. When I feel so depressed, my puppy give me a big smile Car – when I feel so gloomy, I drive to the beach with music so loud, which get rid of my stress

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Hi, [이름]! It's so nice to hear from you again.  I was a little bit worried when I didn't see your name in my list anymore I thought you don't like me as your teacher but I was glad when the manager told me that you would still be my student.  It's always my pleasure to help you.  Good luck in your exam.  I know you can do it.  Just don't get nervous ok.  Take care! Monica It's been a while, isn't it? >>>correctAs I have said before, I am preparing for the TOEFL so that I requested to postpone the class. >>>As I have said before,  I am preparing for the TOEEFL that's why I requested to postpone the class.We will be having a class on November or maybe, December >>>correctI hope to take your kind teaching as early as possible.^^ >>>correct (thank you)we don't have class for a while but i will keep my comoposition up on the message board,and thus I need your continuous attention >>>>correct (just the spelling of composition)Getting beack to the point, please make sure if the following sentences are correct>>>correct (just the spelling of back)Hug – when I get back from work, exhausted and tired, my mother's hug is a great help to overcome my tiredness>>>correctPuppy – a puppy in my house always welcome me. When I feel so depressed, my puppy give me a big smile>>>A puppy in my house always welcomes me. When I feel so depressed, my puppy gives me a big smile.Car – when I feel so gloomy, I drive to the beach with music so loud, which get rid of my stress >>>When I feel so gloomy, I drive to the becah with a loud music which removes my stress( which I use to get rid of my stress)

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