Hello, Monica

At this mment, I wonder about you are going to check my composition. Anyway, I hope you will see my composition. I thought that you are not quite pleasure. Maybe, I should ask a hello to you. Is it right? Of, course I`d like to ask some question to you. But we don`t have much time. As follow your direction, we had already came end of class. So, I always feel sorry. And there is one more reason, it is my English level. Of course, I`m not good at Englsih, however I can`t think the word that I`m going to talk to you. Only Korean word is in my head and mouth. I hope that enhance my ability with you. Have a nice evening.

Hello Se Il! It's always my pleasure to check your composition.  If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask me.  I'll be more than willing to answer your questions.  I guess it would be better if you would directly think in English,  it will be hard at first but you will get use to it.  We will be working hand in hand to develop your English skills and I will do my best to teach you everything.  Just be patient ok.  It takes constant practice to actually get better in speaking the language.  It's like going to the gym,  you cant' expect to have a beautiful body instantly.  You have to work hard to get that beautiful body,  same thing in learning English.  But learning doesn't have to be that hard if we mix it with FUN right.  So let's try to learn English while having fun ok.  See you! Monica At this mment, I wonder about you are going to check my composition. >>>I wonder if you are going to check my composition at this time.Anyway, I hope you will see my composition. >>>correctI thought that you are not quite pleasure. >>>I just thought you are quite busy(I'm not sure if I got your sentence correctly)Maybe, I should ask a hello to you. Is it right? >>>Maybe I should say Hello to you.  Is it right?Of, course I`d like to ask some question to you. >>>>correctBut we don`t have much time. >>>correctAs follow your direction, we had already came end of class. >>>Our class time ended alreadySo, I always feel sorry. >>>correctAnd there is one more reason, it is my English level. >>>correctOf course, I`m not good at Englsih, however I can`t think the word that I`m going to talk to you. >>>I'm not that good in speaking English and I can't think of the right words to sayOnly Korean word is in my head and mouth. >>>correctI hope that enhance my ability with you.>>>I hope that I can enhance my ability with your help.Have a nice evening. >>>correct