Hello, Ms jane!

2012-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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It's Friday and good weather today! And here is my homework! 1. The sun is brightly shining. 2. My sister lives in New York. 3. Birds sing. 4. This cloth feels smooth. 5. Mary became a good doctor. 6. That sounds very interesting. 7. We decided to go on a picnic. 8. We must keep clean the table. 9. The London is capital of England. 10. They speak in America English. I wish you the best weekned! Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Sir Steve! Happy Friday! Thank you for your composition today. You did  great job in answering your homework. You are magnificent! Keep it up! Take care and I\'ll talk with you later. T. JanE ^^It\'s Friday and good weather today!>> It\'s Friday and the weather is good today!And here is my homework!>> Correct.1. The sun is brightly shining.>> The sun is shining brightly.2. My sister lives in New York.>> Correct.3. Birds sing.>> Correct.4. This cloth feels smooth.>> Correct.5. Mary became a good doctor.>> Correct.6. That sounds very interesting.>> Correct.7. We decided to go on a picnic.>> Correct.8. We must keep clean the table.>> We must keep the table clean.9. The London is capital of England.>> London is the capital of England.10. They speak in America English.>> They speak English in America.I wish you the best weekend!>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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