hello, Ms. [Name]!

2012-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

It's started the Febrary. The time is flies as you wrote old time. This is fallen so many snow from yesterday. Maybe I will can study the Toeic front of this time, because I weak the grammar. Anyway, this is my homework today. 1. To make my son happy, I had his bedroom (painting) light blue. 2. Robert was reluctant, but we finally got him (to playing) soccer for our team. 3. I made my daughter (washing) the dishes before she could go to the mall with her friend. 4. When i had to the tow truck, William let me (use) his cell phone. 5. Instead of buying a new bicycle, I had my old one (repairing). 6. We did not know the way to the cottage so we had Jim (draw) a map for us. 7. I helped my son (finishing) his paper route. 8. John had his landlord (to fix) the furnace brfore winter. 9. I need to (digging) a place in the garden to plant flowers. 10. "I'm sorry, you cannot speak to Mr. [Name]. He is (seeing) a client." Thank you so much!

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir Steve! Thank you so much for your composition today. How are you now? Are you feeling better? Do you still have a flu? I hope that you are okay now. Take care and I\'ll talk with you later. T. JanE ^^ It\'s started the Febrary.>> February has started.The time is flies as you wrote old time.>> Time flies as you told me before.This is fallen so many snow from yesterday.>> It has been snowing heavily since yesterday.Maybe I will can study the Toeic front of this time, because I weak the grammar.>> Maybe I will study TOEIC from this time because I\'m poor at grammar.Anyway, this is my homework today.>> Correct.1. To make my son happy, I had his bedroom (painting) light blue.>> To make my son happy, I had his bedroom painted light blue.2. Robert was reluctant, but we finally got him (to playing) soccer for our team.>> Roberto was reluctant, but we finally got him to play soccer for our team.3. I made my daughter (washing) the dishes before she could go to the mall with her friend.>> I made my daughter wash the dishes before she could go to the mall with her friends. 4. When i had to the tow truck, William let me (use) his cell phone.>> Correct.5. Instead of buying a new bicycle, I had my old one (repairing).>> Instead of buying a new bicycle, I had my old one repaired.6. We did not know the way to the cottage so we had Jim (draw) a map for us.>> Correct.7. I helped my son (finishing) his paper route.>> I helped my son finish his paper route.8. John had his landlord (to fix) the furnace brfore winter.>> John had his landlord fix the furnace before winter.9. I need to (digging) a place in the garden to plant flowers.>> I need to dig a place in the garden to plant flowers.10. \"I\'m sorry, you cannot speak to Mr. [Name]. He is (seeing) a client.\">> Correct.Thank you so much! >> Correct.

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