Hello, Ms. [Name]!
학생이 쓴 원문
This is the funny and sad story.
By the way it is so difficult problems, so I did do my best.
This board is limited the volum of the alphabet.
So I wrote the sentence of the question.
He wanted to (ask Julia out).
So he (called her up).
Finally, Julia (picked up) the phone.
Karl got really nervous and (hung up).
Five minutes later, he (called her back).
Karl offered to (pick her up) at eight o’clock and (take her out) for dinner.
Julia already had a date, so she (turned him down) an excuse.
Karl was disappointed because she had (getting along).
Later that night, Karl decided to (get over) his friend Karin.
He wanted to (made up) what to do about Julia.
He still really liked her and just couldn’t (on figure out) her.
He decided to (cheer himself up) with a drink, so he walked down the street to the local bar.
They seem to be (drop in) very well.
He decided to (give up on) Julia but it is took two weeks to get over the humiliation.
Thank you so much!
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sir Steve!
Thank you for your composition today. I really appreciate you for always doing your best. I also know that you are very busy yet you find time to do your responsibility as a student. Keep up the good work! Take care and have a good time.I\'ll talk with you later.
T. JanE ^^
This is the funny and sad story.
>> This is a funny and sad story.By the way it is so difficult problems, so I did do my best.>> By the way, it is a difficult homework, so I did my best.This board is limited the volum of the alphabet.>> This board has a limited space.So I wrote the sentence of the question. >> So, I just wrote the sentences that require answers.He wanted to (ask Julia out).>> Correct.So he (called her up).>> Correct.Finally, Julia (picked up) the phone.>> Correct.Karl got really nervous and (hung up).>> Correct.Five minutes later, he (called her back).>> Correct.Karl offered to (pick her up) at eight o’clock and (take her out) for dinner.>> Correct.Julia already had a date, so she (turned him down) an excuse.>> Julia already had a date, so she made up an excuse.Karl was disappointed because she had (getting along).>> Karl was really disappointed because she had turned him down.Later that night, Karl decided to (get over) his friend Karin.>> Later that night, Karl decided to drop in on his friend Karin. He needed help.He wanted to (made up) what to do about Julia.>> He wanted to figure out what to do about Julia.He still really liked her and just couldn’t (on figure out) her.>> He still really liked her and just couldn\'t get over her. He decided to (cheer himself up) with a drink, so he walked down the street to the local bar.>> Correct.They seem to be (drop in) very well.>> They seemed to be getting along very well.He decided to (give up on) Julia but it took two weeks to get over the humiliation.>> Correct.Thank you so much!
>> Correct.
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