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2012-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1. Today is a red-letter day for our football club. For the first time ever, we've won the championship. 2. You can see Bob's yellow streak when another player is running straight at him and Bob tries to get out of the way. 3. Thr guy in the apartment next door was caught red-handed peeping on our cute neighbour. 4. If you are in the black, you don't owe money. 5. Many politicians try to keep people in the dark about their secret business deals. 6. If someone is in the red they have been owe money. 7. If people find something that makes them a lot of money, they often kill the goose that laid the golden egg because of their greed. 8. We live in a town in the desert now. It's hot and dry most days, and once in a blue moon it will rain quite a lot. 9. The economic crash came out og the blue. Nobody had predicted it. 10. We're heading out to paint the town red tonight, so don't forget to bring plenty of cash. This has many sentence, too. Tank you so much!

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Hi! How are you? I hope you\'re doing fine.Thank you for sending me your composition. You did a great job. Keep it up! Take Care always! Teacher Jane 1. Today is a red-letter day for our football club. For the first time ever, we\'ve won the championship. >>Correct2. You can see Bob\'s yellow streak when another player is running straight at him and Bob tries to get out of the way.>>Correct3. Thr guy in the apartment next door was caught red-handed peeping on our cute neighbour.>>Correct4. If you are in the black, you don\'t owe money.>>Correct5. Many politicians try to keep people in the dark about their secret business deals.>>Correct6. If someone is in the red they have been owe money.>>If someone is in the red they owe money7. If people find something that makes them a lot of money, they often kill the goose that laid the golden egg because of their greed.>>Correct8. We live in a town in the desert now. It\'s hot and dry most days, and once in a blue moon it will rain quite a lot.>>Correct9. The economic crash came out of the blue. Nobody had predicted it.>>Correct10. We\'re heading out to paint the town red tonight, so don\'t forget to bring plenty of cash.>>CorrectThis has many sentence, too.>>This has a lot of sentences.Tank you so much! >>Thank you so much.

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