Hello, Ms. [Name]!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Wonderful Wednesday afternoon Ms. [Name] [이름]!
I am sorry to hear that you are sick since yesterday.
I hope that you will get well soon.
The sickness that I hate the most is having colds so I know what you feel specially when having a sore throat.
Oh my God.
So I hope that you will not talk too much today and I do understand if you were not able to have our class for two days.
There are still many classes left so don\'t worry about that.
Okay?
Just keep yourself warm and be careful next time.
Especially that you were exposed yesterday because of the exhibition so you were over fatigued.
Please get well soon Ms. [Name] [이름] and hope to hear your beautiful voice soon too. kkk
See you!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Hello~ Ms.Kathrine.
>> correct!
How are you, today?
>> How are you today?
I\'m....sick...Y.Y
>> correct!
I have a cold at last Monday, and I had to stand up for exhibition all day yesterday.
>> I have a cold last Monday, and I stand up in the exhibition all day long yesterday.
My company participate in the exhibition ,KORMARINE2013 at BEXCO, from yesterday.
>> My company participated in the exhibition, KORMARINE at the BEXCO yesterday.
I think, over 100 company take part in the show.
>> I think over 100 companies took in the show.
So there was dry and dusty because many people were there for watching the exhibition.
>> It was so dry and dusty there because many people were watching the exhibition.
I went there as helper.
>> correct!
I made about 50 cup of coffee, clean the tables, welcome guests, hand out brochure and gift.
>> I made about 50 cups of coffee, clean the tables, welcome guests and hand out brochures and gifts.
I did do that alone!!!
>> I did that alone!!
Othere staffs also were busy to explane about the product.
>> Other staffs were also busy to explain about the products.
Therefore, the cold worsend.
>> Therefore, my colds worsen.
My throat is swellen, I can\'t say long word, I have a headache.
>> My throat is swollen and I can\'t talk for a long time and I also have a headache.
And I still be the office to work,
>> And I still have to be in the office to work.
It is so serious and terrible.
>> correct!
Anyway I\'m soory to postpone the class again.
>> correct! (spelling-sorry)
See you tommrrow.
>> See you tomorrow!
And take care you, too.
>> And you take care too.
Don\'t catch a cold.
>> correct!
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