Hello, Ms. [Name].
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Hi there Ms. [Name] [이름]!
So sorry for the late correction.
We had a training this morning during our break so I didn\'t have time to check it right ahead.
Anyway, the food that I\'m telling you is call Dak Galbi.
Thank for re[이름]ding me.
I forgot about it already.
And I\'m looking forward for your good news that you have successful cooked a food.
Furthermore, I think you really need to travel or go non a tour sometimes to get rid of that boring life that you are referring to.
It\'s really important that you get out from that once in a while.
And if you will not, I think you will be crazy after.. kkkkk
See you later Ms. [Name] [이름]!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Good morning, Ms.Kathrine!
>> correct!
You didn\'t tell me the food name what you made before.
>> You didn\'t tell me the name of the food that you made before.
You mentioned the ingredients are chicken,and tteok etc.
>> correct!
I have no idea what food is.
>> I have no idea what food it is.
I thought about my cooking skill since last tuesday, it is serious problem.
>> correct! (capitalization-Tuesday)
Therefore, I deter[이름]ed to cook when I stay home on sunday.
>> Therefore I am deter[이름]ed to cook when I am staying at home every Sunday.
If I success to make good dish, I will boast of it.
>> If I succeed in making a good dish, I will boast about it.
Please waite the great good news!
>> Please wait for the good news.
Anyway, tell me about the food name.
>> Anyway, please tell me about the name of the food.
For you, what would be the worst job you could imagine?
If I work in the assembly line in the factory, it will be awful to stand or sit on same posture.
>> If I am working in the same line in the factory, it will be awful to stand or sit on the same posture.
I will do same work everyday on same position.
>> I will do the same work everyday on the same position.
Actually, my job is not different from that.
>> correct!
I always arrive in the office until 08:30, turn on the computer, sit down in front of my desk and start some paper works or computer work.
>> I always arrive in the office at 8:30, turn on the computer, sit in front of the desk and start some paper works or computer works.
I work again after lunch time to the closing hour.
>> I will work again after the lunch time until the closing time.
I go to the boxing class or home after that and sleep.
>> I go to the boxing class or go home after that and sleep.
I want to get off the boring life.
>> correct!
>> or: I want to be freed from this boring life.
So I seach the tour information like airfare, tourist attractions sometimes.
>> So sometimes, I am searching a tour information like airfare, and tourist attractions.
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