Hello, Ms. [Name].

2013-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Good morning, Ms.Kathrine! You didn't tell me the food name what you made before. You mentioned the ingredients are chicken,and tteok etc. I have no idea what food is. I thought about my cooking skill since last tuesday, it is serious problem. Therefore, I deter[이름]ed to cook when I stay home on sunday. If I success to make good dish, I will boast of it. Please waite the great good news! Anyway, tell me about the food name. -Homework- For you, what would be the worst job you could imagine? If I work in the assembly line in the factory, it will be awful to stand or sit on same posture. I will do same work everyday on same position. Actually, my job is not different from that. I always arrive in the office until 08:30, turn on the computer, sit down in front of my desk and start some paper works or computer work. I work again after lunch time to the closing hour. I go to the boxing class or home after that and sleep. I want to get off the boring life. So I seach the tour information like airfare, tourist attractions sometimes.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name] [이름]! 

So sorry for the late correction. 

We had a training this morning during our break so I didn\'t have time to check it right ahead. 
Anyway, the food that I\'m telling you is call Dak Galbi. 

Thank for re[이름]ding me. 
I forgot about it already. 

And I\'m looking forward for your good news that you have successful cooked a food. 

Furthermore, I think you really need to travel or go non a tour sometimes to get rid of that boring life that you are referring to. 

It\'s really important that you get out from that once in a while. 

And if you will not, I think you will be crazy after.. kkkkk

See you later Ms. [Name] [이름]! 


Always, 
Kathrine ^^


Good morning, Ms.Kathrine!

>> correct! 

You didn\'t tell me the food name what you made before.

>> You didn\'t tell me the name of the food that you made before. 

You mentioned the ingredients are chicken,and tteok etc.

>> correct! 

I have no idea what food is.

>> I have no idea what food it is. 

I thought about my cooking skill since last tuesday, it is serious problem.

>> correct! (capitalization-Tuesday)

Therefore, I deter[이름]ed to cook when I stay home on sunday.

>>  Therefore I am deter[이름]ed to cook when I am staying at home every Sunday. 

If I success to make good dish, I will boast of it.

>> If I succeed in making a good dish, I will boast about it. 

Please waite the great good news!

>> Please wait for the good news. 

Anyway, tell me about the food name.

>> Anyway, please tell me about the name of the food. 


-Homework-

For you, what would be the worst job you could imagine?


If I work in the assembly line in the factory, it will be awful to stand or sit on same posture.

>> If I am working in the same line in the factory, it will be awful to stand or sit on the same posture. 

I will do same work everyday on same position.

>>  I will do the same work everyday on the same position. 

Actually, my job is not different from that.

>>  correct! 

I always arrive in the office until 08:30, turn on the computer, sit down in front of my desk and start some paper works or computer work.

>> I always arrive in the office at 8:30, turn on the computer, sit in front of the desk and start some paper works or computer works. 

I work again after lunch time to the closing hour.

>> I will work again after the lunch time until the closing time. 

I go to the boxing class or home after that and sleep.

>> I go to the boxing class or go home after that and sleep. 

I want to get off the boring life.

>>  correct! 

>> or: I want to be freed from this boring life. 

So I seach the tour information like airfare, tourist attractions sometimes.

>> So sometimes, I am searching a tour information like airfare, and tourist attractions. 

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