Hello My dear.^^

2014-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How was your day? I have spent a day, I feel alive. Altough, I will be able to share My feel to you perfectly, I can say that I am excited. Since sometime, I have lived, do not feel alive. Reasons that make me feel like this may be there but I can not explan these reasons. If I had more expressions in English, I can explain more detail now... I am so sorry that I can not do this. Anyway, I am excited now. This feel is that I am able to do everythings.^^ Maybe, I will be able to explain those next our class, I must share with you.^^ Have a good night.^^ -Homework for today- List the conversation topics that you abhor. ^.= Discuss why you hate talking about such. I hate conversations that is negative. It make people nehatively absolutely. I love every conversation topic, but it is not. What is conversation topics you hate?

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I had another wonderful day Kirk! Wednesday went be swiftly, but I suppose I have accomplished many things. Yesterday, my good friend took me to two different cafes that I\'ve never been before. I\'ll take you there some time! It sure is good to be alive!!! I really am so happy for you Kirk! Finally, you started feeling that way. I bet you have waited for that kind of emotion for a long time. Cherish it! Don\'t worry, I can wait for your explanation. Just let me know when you\'re ready. Come to think of it, there are many things that are just too difficult to explain with just plain words. I want to see the look in your face while relating your story. Let us stay away from negative conversation topics then, so we won\'t feel depressed. Don\'t exhaust yourself during your training Kirk! Like you said earlier, \"Take things easy\" so you have to do the same. I will catch you again tomorrow. May you continue to have a wonderful day! _Klein How was your day? >>CorrectI have spent a day, I feel alive. >>Correct OR >> I have spent another day, so I feel alive.Altough, I will be able to share My feel to you perfectly, I can say that I am excited. >>Although I won\'t be able to share my feelings to you perfectly, I can say that I am excited.Since sometime, I have lived, do not feel alive. >>Since some time, I have lived, where I didn\'t feel so alive.Reasons that make me feel like this may be there but I can not explan these reasons. >>There may be reasons that make me feel like this but I can not explain them.If I had more expressions in English, I can explain more detail now... >>If I knew more expressions in English, I would explain more in detail now.I am so sorry that I can not do this. >>CorrectAnyway, I am excited now. >>CorrectThis feel is that I am able to do everythings.^^ >>This feeling is like I am able to do everything. >>I feel like I can do everything.Maybe, I will be able to explain those next our class, I must share with you.^^ >>Maybe, if I am able to explain those on our next class, I must share them with you.Have a good night.^^>>Correct!!!-Homework for today-List the conversation topics that you abhor. ^.=Discuss why you hate talking about such.I hate conversations that is negative. >>I hate conversations that are negative. >>I hate negative conversation topics. >>I hate having negative conversations.It make people nehatively absolutely. >>It absolutely makes people feel and think negatively.I love every conversation topic, but it is not.>>I love every conversation topic, except for this.What is conversation topics you hate? >>What conversation topics do you hate? >>What is the conversation topic that you hate?

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