Hello my Teacher...Please check my homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing your answer. You are right. People nowadays are very concerned about skin color because they think
that people might bring them down. Gender equality is also an issue in the world. Our world is not perfect, but even though we try our best to be
perfect, there are still obstacles.
By the way, there\'s a super typhoon here in the Philippines. It is cold, raining, cloudy, and so windy.
See you later. Take care! ^^
~~May~~
It easily is able to see discrimination in a company.
>> Discrimination happens in the society.
For example, a woman often gets earnings less than a man in Korea
and there also are people to discriminate with their skin color.
>> An example of this is when women get lower salary than men in Korea
and some people also discriminate the skin color.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.