Hello my Teacher...Please check my homework

2018-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I. Give the synonym of each word. 1. dangerous - hazardous, perilous, risky 2. attractive - beautiful, pretty, handsome, lovely, good-looking, gorgeous 3. end - finish 4. scared - afraid, alarmed, frightened, terrified, fearful 5. peaceful - harmonious, amicable, nonviolent II. WRITING What do you think is the most serious problem in the world? Why do you think so? What can we do as individuals to solve this problem? --> I think it's environmental pollution. More and more our earth is falling sick because of that. We have to use the things to be able to cause environmental polliution less than now. For example, Plastic, Vinyl and so on. Hello my teacher..See you today class.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. Great job! Your answers in the first part are very good!

In the writing task, I\'ve noticed that many of my students answered like that. You are really concern about your environment.

Hope to talk to you later. ^^

~~May~~

1. dangerous - hazardous, perilous, risky

>> VERY GOOD!
2. attractive - beautiful, pretty, handsome, lovely, good-looking,
gorgeous

>> VERY GOOD!
3. end - finish

>> VERY GOOD!
4. scared - afraid, alarmed, frightened, terrified, fearful

>> VERY GOOD!
5. peaceful - harmonious, amicable, nonviolent

>> VERY GOOD!

I think it\'s environmental pollution.

>> I think the most serious problem in the world is environmental pollution.
More and more our earth is falling sick because of that.

>> More people are now sick because of it.
We have to use the things to be able to cause environmental
polliution less than now.
For example, Plastic, Vinyl and so on.

>> We must minimize our use of plastics now like vinyl, to get rid of the environmental pollution.

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