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Q: where is the most impressed in your travel? A: The most impressed place was Patagonia. Patagonoa is the end of south america in Chile and Argentina. There are huge glacier and beautiful mountain. When I travel there I felt that I'm standing in the another planet. The view in front of me was unrealistic. Nobody can explain using language how beautiful and amazing that place. Q: Why did you go to the military? A: As you know every korea men should go to the army. And the guys who already finished their duty, they talk a lot about military service. So I was curious what is military service, and why every men say that it is too hard. Also I wanted to experience tough especially in my young age. I thought it should be helpful for my future when I meet difficult situation. That's why I chose be a soldier.

Good evening [이름] Na! You have here two very nice questions. For the first one, you did good in mentioning the place but try to elaborate more about the place. You can describe the specific things you saw there. As for the second question. Your answer was a little [이름] better. It\'s just that you have some minimal mistakes with your sentences. When you are being are about a place or something. Try to elaborate more on it. You can describe it. You can also add how you got there. Who were you with and etc... Your answer on the second question was good. Brief and meaningful. If you cannot find the correct words to use. It is okay to prolong your answere as long as you don\'t go around the bush. So, Try checking your corrections and if ever you have any questions? You can ask me tomorrow. Have a good night. See you again tomorrow.   Always, ~Aimee^^   Q: where is the most impressed in your travel? >> Q: What place were you most impressed during your travel?A: The most impressed place was Patagonia. >> The place I was most impressed with was Patagonia.  Patagonoa is the end of south america in Chile and Argentina. >> Patagonia is the tip of South America in Chile and Argentina. There are huge glacier and beautiful mountain. >> There are huge glaciers and beatiful mountains. When I travel there I felt that I\'m standing in the another planet. >> When I went there, I felt like I was standing in another planet. >> When I went there, I felt like I was in another world. The view in front of me was unrealistic. >> Correct >> The view was unbelievable. Nobody can explain using language how beautiful and amazing that place. >> I cannot explain in any language how beautiful and amazing the place was.Q: Why did you go to the military? >> Why did you join the military?A: As you know every korea men should go to the army. >> As you already know, Every Korean man should join the military. And the guys who already finished their duty, they talk a lot about military service. >> The guys who are already done with their duty talk a lot about military service. So I was curious what is military service, and why every men say that it is too hard. >> So, I got curious about the military and thought why every man say that it is too hard. Also I wanted to experience tough especially in my young age. >> Also, I wanted to experience tough challenges especially that I was young then. I thought it should be helpful for my future when I meet difficult situation. >> I thought that it could be helpful for my future if I over come these difficult tasks. That\'s why I chose be a soldier. >>  Correct