Hello. Nice to see you in person. ~~~~
학생이 쓴 원문
> How do you usually introduce yourself to a new customer?
Hello. Nice to see you in person. My name is [이름][이름] [이름] but you can just call me JY. And I am located in Frankfurt office. My key role is support communication between my Korean colleagues and you. My base is engineering so I can support as technical side.
강사 첨삭
Hello SIr JY! Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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Hello. >>> correct
Nice to see you in person.
>>> correct
My name is [이름][이름] [이름] but you can just call me JY.
>>> correct
>>> OR: My name is [이름] Young [이름] but people call me JY.
And I am located in Frankfurt office.
>>> OR: I am situated in the Frankfurt office.
My key role is support communication between my Korean colleagues and you.
>>> My key role is to support communication between my Korean colleagues and you.
My base is engineering so I can support as technical side.
>>> OR: My field is in engineering so I can support you with technical concerns.
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