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2018-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 May

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What countries would you travel to if you were to do a world trip? I would like to travel to the Czech Republic and the Philippines. I particularly would like to go to Prague Castle and Cesky krumlov. Cesky Krumlov is the village that it has a buautiful houses such as a children's story and Prague Castle also is very buautiful. There are gathered a church, a abbey and a palace in the castle. I went to Philippines Cebu for my honeymoon. It patiularly has a beautiful sea and is the place that there is the memories with my wife. I would like to go to not only Cebu but also Baquio you told me last class. Dear. my teacher How were you today? It was strongly wind in my city today. Have nice a night.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. And thank you also for considering Philippines as the place

you like to travel. Baguio is one of the places that most people visit. It is cool here. It is the coolest city

in the Philippines. There are many mountains here and beautiful flowers. In February, we have a Flower

Festival here. December to February are the best months to visit Baguio. ^^

~~May~~

I would like to travel to the Czech Republic and the Philippines.

>> I would like to travel to Czech Republic and the Philippines.
I particularly would like to go to Prague Castle and Cesky krumlov.

>> CORRECT
Cesky Krumlov is the village that it has a buautiful houses such as a children\'s story and Prague Castle also is very buautiful.

>> Cesky Krumlov is the village that has beautiful houses. Prague Castle also is very beautiful.
There are gathered a church, a abbey and a palace in the castle.

>> There is a church, an abbey and a palace.
I went to Philippines Cebu for my honeymoon.

>> I went to Cebu, Philippines for my honeymoon.
It patiularly has a beautiful sea and is the place that there is the memories with my wife.

>> There is a beautiful sea and that is the place where my wife and I had many beautiful memories.
I would like to go to not only Cebu but also Baquio you told me last class.

>> I also would like to go to Baguio as you told me in the last class.

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