hello pretty!

2011-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Bianca

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are you okay? this morning , i was really surprised that you were sick. are you okay ???????????????????????????????????????? i'm sick too....:( this morning, i barely went to english academy. but i couldn't concentrate on my study because i really wanted to go to bad. after that class, i came back home, i slept for several minutes. when i went to school again for my classes, i felt that my boby is little strange. so i slept once again for 3 hours. my feel is better, but i'm cold still. healthy is the best important thing. isn't it?

강사 첨삭

Indeed health is wealth, you won’t be able to enjoy life if you have a poor health condition, so it is very important to put your health as a priority. Take care! Take lots of vitamin c! T.Bianca   are you okay? >>correct (Capitalize first letter of each sentence)this morning , i was really surprised that you were sick. >>correct (Capitalize first letter of each sentence)are you okay ???????????????????????????????????????? >>correct (one punctuationmark is okay)i'm sick too....:( >>correct (Capitalize first letter of each sentence)this morning, i barely went to english academy. >>This morning, I almost didn’t go to the english academy.but i couldn't concentrate on my study because i really wanted to go to bad. >>I couldn’t concentrate in class because I really wanted to go to bed. (Omit BUT) after that class, i came back home, i slept for several minutes. >>After that class, I weNt back home and I took a nap. when i went to school again for my classes, i felt that my boby is little strange. >>When I went back to school again, I really didn’t feel well. so i slept once again for 3 hours. >>So I slept once again for another three hours.my feel is better, but i'm cold still. >>I feel better now , but I still feel cold.healthy is the best important thing. isn't it? >>Health is the most important thing, isn’t  it?>>”Health is wealth” (Health is wealth" is one of many common sayings that has been used over the years to describe that one's good healthshould be prized above all else.)

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