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hi! these day, i can feel my english skill become upgrade. (do you agree with me? haha:)) because i study toeic speaking test, i can speak more detail things. and i like to review the lesson which i study with you. oh! this friday, i will go to travel agency fair in seoul. but i can get your call:) have a nice day^^ always thanks you:)

Hello there! Thank you for your composition today! Please be guided by the corrections below. Have a great day! T. Joanna   these day, i can feel my english skill become upgrade.>> These days, I can feel that my English communication skill is improving.(do you agree with me? haha:))>> Correct.because i study toeic speaking test, i can speak more detail things.>> Because I'm studying TOEIC Speaking, I can give a more detailed speech.and i like to review the lesson which i study with you.>> I like to review the lesson that I studied with you.oh! this friday, i will go to travel agency fair in seoul.>> Oh! This Friday, I will go to a Travel Agency Fair in Seoul.but i can get your call:)>> Correct.have a nice day^^>> Correct.always thanks you:) >> I'm always thankful to you :)