hello pretty!
학생이 쓴 원문
hi! long time no see.
last week, i went to seoul to participate in travel agency fair.
i learned lots of thing. and my body was so exhausted.
yesterday, i came back to jeju at 8:00 pm.
i was really tired because of hard schedule.
but i had a report by tommorow.
and i started that at that time.
i don't know how can i control my schedule and my complicate mind.
i always wonder that i can be a succesful person.
have a nice night and we can meet tommorow!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Blissful Monday! I am very happy because you have a great time participating in travel agency fair. I really believe that you will be a successful person someday. Just keep doing the best in everything you do and later you will be rewarded with your effort. Teacher Joanna
hi! long time no see.
>>> Hi! Long time no see.last week, i went to seoul to participate in travel agency fair.
>>> Last week, I went to Seoul to participate in travel agency fair.i learned lots of thing. and my body was so exhausted.
>>> I learned lots of things and my body was so exhausted.yesterday, i came back to jeju at 8:00 pm.
>>> Yesterday, I came back to Jeju at 8:00 pm.i was really tired because of hard schedule.
>>> I was really tired because of hard schedule.but i had a report by tommorow.
and i started that at that time.
>>> But I had a report by tomorrow and I will have to start that at that time.i don't know how can i control my schedule and my complicate mind.
>>> I don't know how can I control my schedule and my complicate mind.i always wonder that i can be a succesful person.
>>> I always wonder if I could be a successful person.have a nice night and we can meet tommorow!
>>> Have a nice night so that we can meet tomorrow!
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