hello pretty!

2011-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

hi. today, i could not get your call. last night i went to bed at 12:00 but i couldn't sleep well. since last August, i have been alone. but i couldn't feel that fact because of my busy schedule. but after final exam, i don't have reports and something i had to. i don't know if you understand me, i'm very fraustrated that fact. i don't know what can i do...:(

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Please don't think that I don't understand you. I had been once a student so I know how busy you are. I hope to talk to you very soon. Take care ^--^ today, i could not get your call.>> Today, I haven't answered your call. last night i went to bed at 12:00>> Last night, I went to bed at 12:00 midnight. but i couldn't sleep well.>> But I coudn't sleep well. since last August, i have been alone. but i couldn't feel that fact because of my busy schedule.>> Since August, I've been alone but I can't feel that because of my busy schedule. but after final exam, i don't have reports and something i had to.>> But after my final exam I don't need to do anything like reports and so on. i don't know if you understand me, i'm very fraustrated that fact.>> I don't know if you can understand me, I'm frustrated by thinking you don't. i don't know what can i do...:( >> I don't know what i can do.

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