Hello Rowena,

Hello Rowena, It's my first compostion to send you. I was having busy days but after passing busy days I feel empty. I lose something in my heart. I can't concentrate on my work. I need a girl who cares of me. Honestly, I had a plan to change my job which will be well benefited as well as a better salary. In my opinion, after I am well qualified, I will meet a better girl. I know that meeting my idea girl can be harder than I think. I had a couple of girl friends before but what reasons can be no longer. Everyone has many options in their life. There is not the right one. There has the both sides of ways. I believe that I choose what I want to and I came here. I appeciate that I was born in a happy family. My health is quite good. I have close friends. With many good things, I am supposed to be happy but I am not satisfied with my currently situation. Moving up in a firm, earning a much higher salary. I wrote down what I thought, don't put your mind. Thanks for your time

Hello there! Thanks for sending your very first composition for our class.:) Stay optimistic and learn how to be contented with what you have now.You\'ll never know that you\'ll be very successful in your current job. But of course, a greener pasture is better.:) Live a happy life, remember, we live only once.:) Fighting! Fighting! ( ha ha ha ):) Cheer up! T. Rowena:)    Hello Rowena, >>correct!It\'s my first compostion to send you. >> It\'s my first composition sent to you. OR >> It is my first composition for our class. I was having busy days but after passing busy days I feel empty. >> I had very busy days but after these days have passed by, I feel empty.I lose something in my heart. >>correct!I can\'t concentrate on my work. >>correct! I need a girl who cares of me. >> I need a girl who takes care of me. OR: >> I need a girl who care about me.Honestly, I had a plan to change my job which will be well benefited as well as a better salary. >>Honestly, I have a plan to change my job to a well-benefited and well-paid one. OR >> Honestly, I\'m planning to change my job to a well-benefited and well-paid one. In my opinion, after I am well qualified, I will meet a better girl. >>correct!I know that meeting my idea girl can be harder than I think. >>correct! OR: >> I know that meeting my ideal girl might me harder than I think.I had a couple of girl friends before but what reasons can be no longer. >>DO you mean: I had a couple of girl friends before but they were just my friends and I can\'t keep the relationship like if  have a girlfriend.Everyone has many options in their life. >>Everyone has many options in their lives. There is not the right one. >> Do you mean: There is one which it  isn\'t right. There has the both sides of ways. >>Do you mean:  It has the both side of ways.I believe that I choose what I want to and I came here. >> I believe that I chose what I want and came here. I appeciate that I was born in a happy family. >>correct! //appreciate // OR: >>  I\'m proud that I belong to a happy family.My health is quite good. >>correct!I have close friends. >>correct! With many good things, I am supposed to be happy but I am not satisfied with my currently situation. >>With many good things, I am supposed to be happy but I am not satisfied with my current situation. OR >> With many good things, I am supposed to be happy but then I am not yet satisfied with my current situation. Moving up in a firm, earning a much higher salary. >>correct!I wrote down what I thought, don\'t put your mind. >>Do you mean: I just wrote what I thought. It has nothing to do with any thing.Thanks for your time >>correct!