Hello Sally
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Sally!
Today, the weather is rainy which is accompany with the thunder.
I woke up astonishingly in order to the thunder.
How about you? Have you gotten on the rain?
Homework:
1) Julia rescued three cats.
Three cats are rescued by Julia.
2) The students handed in the reports.
The reports are handed by the students.
3) Maria crashed into the blue car.
The blue car is crashed by Maria.
4) Alex learned the poem.
The poem is learned by Alex.
5) Steven has forgotten the book.
The book has been forgotten by steven.
6) The mechanic has not repaired the DVD recorder.
The DVD recorder has not been repaired by the mechanic.
7) They play handball.
Band ball is played by them.
8) Sue puts the rucksack on the floor.
The rucksack on the floor is put by Sue.
9) The girls had lost the match.
The match had been lost by the girls.
10) The teacher is not going to open the window.
The window is not went to open by the teacher.
강사 첨삭
Hey Rooney^_^ I had fun talking with you a while ago.^_^Thank you so much for being so participative. I always appreciate it. For your homework, please becareful with the tenses of your verbs okay?^_^Please review my corrections.^_^Have a great night^^
T. Sally~
Hello Sally!
>>>CORRECTToday, the weather is rainy which is accompany with the thunder.
>>>Today, the weather is rainy and it is accompanied by thunder.I woke up astonishingly in order to the thunder.
>>>I woke up astonishingly because of thunder.How about you? Have you gotten on the rain?
>>>How about you? Have you gotten in the rain?Homework:1) Julia rescued three cats.Three cats are rescued by Julia.
>>>Three cats were rescued. 2) The students handed in the reports.The reports are handed by the students.
>>>The reports were handed in. 3) Maria crashed into the blue car.The blue car is crashed by Maria.
>>>The blue car was crashed into. 4) Alex learned the poem.The poem is learned by Alex.
>>>The poem was learned. 5) Steven has forgotten the book.The book has been forgotten by steven.
>>>The book has been forgotten by Steven.6) The mechanic has not repaired the DVD recorder.The DVD recorder has not been repaired by the mechanic.
>>>CORRECT7) They play handball.Band ball is played by them.
>>>Handball is played. 8) Sue puts the rucksack on the floor.The rucksack on the floor is put by Sue.
>>>The rucksack is put on the floor. 9) The girls had lost the match.The match had been lost by the girls.
>>>CORRECT10) The teacher is not going to open the window.The window is not went to open by the teacher.
>>>The window is not going to be opened.
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