Hello Sally
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Sally!
TGIM. Because the weekend is end,I think that you may don't like Monday perhaps.
Today is very hot. so I was exhausted.
and I was angry about timid thing.
1) She never cleans the van.
Has she ever been the van before?
2) Kim and Tina are playing ball in the garden.
What are Kim and Tina doing in the garden?
3) They are running home.
What are they doing ?
4) Mr. [Name] has been living in Montreal for ten years.
Where has Mr. [Name] been living?
5) Anne likes her new job very much.
Does she like her new job?
6) The Barnes are planning a trip to Norway.
What does he plan?
7) The shop will be closed until next month.
How long the shop is closed?
8) Beverly usually gets up at 6.30 am.
When does Beverly get up?
9) He can't meet Sharon because she is very ill.
Can he meet Sharon? If he can't Why?
10) Every evening Steven listens to his new CDs.
What are Steven doing every evening?
강사 첨삭
Thank you for making your answer. Teacher Sally is sick today, so I took over her class for you. I placed the corrections and the explanation for each mistakes. If you have any questions, just let me know okay? Take Care! I\'ll talk to you later.
T. Kate^^
Here are my corrections for you:Hello Sally!
>> CorrectTGIM. Because the weekend is end,I think that you may don\'t like Monday perhaps.
>> TGIM! Because the weekend is the already over. I think you may not like Mondays do you?Today is very hot. so I was exhausted.
>> Today is very hot, that\'s why Im so exhausted.and I was angry about timid thing.
>> And i was so angry about timid things.1) She never cleans the van.Has she ever been the van before?
>> What does she never clean?2) Kim and Tina are playing ball in the garden.What are Kim and Tina doing in the garden? >> Correct
3) They are running home.What are they doing ?
>> Where are they running? 4) Mr. [Name] has been living in Montreal for ten years.Where has Mr. [Name] been living? >> Who has been living in Montreal for ten years?
5) Anne likes her new job very much.Does she like her new job? >> How does Anne like her new job?
6) The Barnes are planning a trip to Norway.What does he plan? >> Where are the Barnes planning a trip?
7) The shop will be closed until next month.How long the shop is closed? >> When will the shop be closed?
8) Beverly usually gets up at 6.30 am.When does Beverly get up? >> When does Beverly usually get up?
9) He can\'t meet Sharon because she is very ill.Can he meet Sharon? If he can\'t Why?>> Why can\'t he meet Sharon?
10) Every evening Steven listens to his new CDs.What are Steven doing every evening?
>> Who listens to his new CDs every evening?
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