Hello, Sally

< This is my composition > I didn't know the pronunciation of ex-girlfriend. I wake up early this morning. not late. I wake up at six thirty. Are there any picture you would never get by without? I don't know how I would get by without my car. I don't know how I would get by without my cellphone. I have a friend who is a chinese. She want me to join her msn. I am happy to get a message from her. I guess she is a good friend to me. Bye~~

Mr. [Name], Thank you so much for sendinig me a composition. I really appreciate it. Anyway, you have good writing skills. You are able to use correct grammar is the sentences. Good job! Anyway, all I would like to say is be be aware of your singular and pluarl form of words like is and are, also your prepositions,punctuation marks and tenses. This  composition was really great. I hope to see more on them soon. Hello, Sally >>Hello Sally! < This is my composition > >>CorrectI didn't know the pronunciation of ex-girlfriend. >>Correct >>I didn't know how to pronounce the word ex-girlfriend.I wake up early this morning. not late. >>I woke up early this morning, not late.I wake up at six thirty. >>I woke up at six thirty.Are there any picture you would never get by without?>>Is there any picture you would never ghet by without? >>Are there any pictures you would never get by without?I don't know how I would get by without my car. >>correctI don't know how I would get by without my cellphone.>>CorrectI have a friend who is a chinese. >>I have a friend who is Chinese. >>I have a Chinese friend.She want me to join her msn. >>She wants me to join her on MSN.I am happy to get a message from her. >>CorrectI guess she is a good friend to me. >>Correct.Bye~~ >>Bye!