Hello, Sally

2011-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

< This is my composition.> I had a get together last night.I went to Incheon. I went to see my previous co-workers. They welcomed me very much. We ate the meat and drunk a soju. and I came back to my office on the early morning. It is very difficult to know how to use the chinese blog. I give up knowing the method because I don't know the chinese. How far is it? It is 40 km far

강사 첨삭

Hi there,         Thank you so much for this composition. I think your precious colleagues still care about you. I just hope you don't have a headache today because of not getting enough sleep and drinking soju. See you on Monday! -Sally- < This is my composition.> >>CorrectI had a get together last night. >>I attended a get together last night. I went to Incheon. >>Correct  I went to see my previous co-workers. >>CorrectThey welcomed me very much.  >>Correct We ate the meat and drunk a soju. >> We ate meat and drunk soju.and I came back to my office on the early morning.>> Then, I came back to my office early in the morning.It is very difficult to know how to use the chinese blog. >>It is very difficult to know how to use Chinese blog.  I give up knowing the method because I don't know the chinese.>> I give up because I don't know the Chinese.How far is it? It is 40 km far. >>Correct

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