Hello, Shy

2010-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Hello, Shy past friday, I had took the opic test in my company. and I had realized that OPIC test is for me. so, I really want to get the Intermediate High level. and, I deter[이름]ed to write about a OPIC Question & Answer myself everyday for get Intermediate High Level. Can I write the OPIC Q&A in my feed-back everyday? Do you inconviniance because of me?

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Hi [이름]!!   So how was your OPIC test last Friday? Was it good? Were you confident? Well, I am sure you aced it.. I know that whatever the result is, it’s the fruit of your effort..^^ See you in class!!   Hello, Shypast friday, I had took the opic test in my company. >>Last Friday, I took the OPIC test in my company.and I had realized that OPIC test is for me. >> After that I realized that OPIC test is for me.so, I really want to get the Intermediate High level. >> So, I really want to get the high intermediate level.and, I deter[이름]ed to write about a OPIC Question & Answer myself everyday for get Intermediate High Level. >> To get that level I’m deter[이름]ed to write about OPIC questions and answers myself everyday.Can I write the OPIC Q&A in my feed-back everyday? >> CorrectDo you be inconvenienced because of me? >> Will that be convenient for you?  

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