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2016-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I'll tell about my favorite subject today. my favorite subject is Math because it's little easy. and i like to calculation. My second subject is P.E. because it's fun and i love to play sport. My third favorite subject morality because the teacher is very fun and we play lot of game and i like playing game with my friend. The fourth is english reason is english teacher is very nice and english is fun. The last is scince because i like taking a scince test. <My un favorite subjet> I hate Korean because it's so sleepy and not fun at all. I hate Art too because i am not good at drawing and making thing i want to be good at drawing and making and i have to practice harder than before and it's too hard to do that.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!   Wow! You have a lot of favorite subjects. I\'m happy to know that. I\'m happier because English is one of them. I know studying is hard. You have to study your least favorite subjects as well even though they\'re boring. Improve your knowledge and skills. ^^ Aja!   _Teacher Dianne   I\'ll tell about my favorite subject today. >> Correctmy favorite subject is Math because it\'s little easy. and i like to calculation. >> My favorite subject is Math because it\'s a little easy and I like to calculate or compute. My second subject is P.E. because it\'s fun and i love to play sport. >> My second favorite subject is P.E. because it\'s fun and I love to play sports. My third favorite subject morality because the teacher is very fun and we play lot of game and i like playing game with my friend. >> My third favorite subject is Morality because the teacher is very fun. We play a lot of games and I like playing games with my friends. The fourth is english reason is english teacher is very nice and english is fun. >> The fourth subject that I like is English because the English teacher is very nice and English is fun as well. The last is scince because i like taking a scince test. >> The last subject that I like is Science because I like taking or doing a science test. <My un favorite subjet> >> This is about my unfavorite subjects. >> My least favorite subjects are Korean and Art. I hate Korean because it\'s so sleepy and not fun at all. >> I hate Korean because it\'s so boring and not fun at all. I hate Art too because i am not good at drawing and making thing >> I hate Art too because I am not good at drawing and making art things.i want to be good at drawing and making and i have to practice harder than before and it\'s too hard to do that. >> I want to be good at drawing and making art things but I have to practice harder than before because it\'s too hard to do that.

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