hello taecher
학생이 쓴 원문
I'll tell about my favorite subject today.
my favorite subject is Math because it's little easy. and i like to calculation.
My second subject is P.E. because it's fun and i love to play sport.
My third favorite subject morality because the teacher is very fun and we
play lot of game and i like playing game with my friend.
The fourth is english reason is english teacher is very nice and english is fun.
The last is scince because i like taking a scince test.
<My un favorite subjet>
I hate Korean because it's so sleepy and not fun at all.
I hate Art too because i am not good at drawing and making thing
i want to be good at drawing and making and i have to practice harder than before
and it's too hard to do that.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Wow! You have a lot of favorite subjects.
I\'m happy to know that.
I\'m happier because English is one of them.
I know studying is hard.
You have to study your least favorite subjects as well even though they\'re boring.
Improve your knowledge and skills. ^^ Aja!
_Teacher Dianne
I\'ll tell about my favorite subject today.
>> Correctmy favorite subject is Math because it\'s little easy. and i like to calculation.
>> My favorite subject is Math because it\'s a little easy and I like to calculate or compute. My second subject is P.E. because it\'s fun and i love to play sport. >> My second favorite subject is P.E. because it\'s fun and I love to play sports.
My third favorite subject morality because the teacher is very fun and we play lot of game and i like playing game with my friend.
>> My third favorite subject is Morality because the teacher is very fun. We play a lot of games and I like playing games with my friends. The fourth is english reason is english teacher is very nice and english is fun.
>> The fourth subject that I like is English because the English teacher is very nice and English is fun as well. The last is scince because i like taking a scince test.
>> The last subject that I like is Science because I like taking or doing a science test.
<My un favorite subjet>
>> This is about my unfavorite subjects.
>> My least favorite subjects are Korean and Art.
I hate Korean because it\'s so sleepy and not fun at all.
>> I hate Korean because it\'s so boring and not fun at all. I hate Art too because i am not good at drawing and making thing
>> I hate Art too because I am not good at drawing and making art things.i want to be good at drawing and making and i have to practice harder than before and it\'s too hard to do that.
>> I want to be good at drawing and making art things but I have to practice harder than before because it\'s too hard to do that.
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