hello, teacher :)

2012-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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Hello~.~ Today is University festival. Soon PSY will come. But now i stay home. >.~ My friends excited state. I came home, because i`m so tired. Maybe tomorrow will be able to hear the story about PSY. ^.^ Homework ~(*.*)~ First of all, I like to party. Questions about if I am to understand correctly, I both it does not matter. A friend's going to have a good reason First, party is not my house rather than in the new space is better. Second, party supplies in our house even when there are no party stuff. In addition, a good thing in my house without having to go back home after the party. Immediately i can rest. And I being able to decorate the house with friends. It is fun. As soon as Christmas come and want to party. Of course, even better if I seems boyfriend. ^.^;;; Good bye:)

강사 첨삭

 Hi there,Jenny! Thank you for dropping by. I am very happy to help you with all your English transaction. You made an impressive answer. Good job! I enjoy reading your sentences. I appreciate your effort in doing your homework. Keep up the good start! I placed corrections and the explanation for each mistakes. Please try to review them for your improvement. By constant pratice and perseverance, I know you\'ll be at par with native English speakers. We can do it! We are almost there! Catch you later :) ~T. Kate^^ Here are my corrections for you: Hello~.~ >> CorrectToday is University festival.>> Today is our Universit\'s festival. Soon PSY will come. >> CorrectBut now i stay home. >.~>>But I just stayed at at home. My friends excited state.>> My friends are excited. I came home, because i`m so tired.>> Correct Maybe tomorrow will be able to hear the story about PSY. ^.^>> Correct (Good Job!) Homework ~(*.*)~First of all, I like to party.>> Correct >> OR First of all, I like going to a party. Questions about if I am to understand correctly, I both it does not matter.>>I hope I understood the questions correctly, but it doesn\'t matter. A friend\'s going to have a good reason >> DID YOU MEAN: My friends should have a good reasonin going to a party. First, party is not my house rather than in the new space is better. >> First of all, party shouldn\'t be in my house rather it should be held on another space. >> OR First of all, it\'s better to celebrate a party on another space. Second, party supplies in our house even when there are no party stuff.>> DID YOU MEAN: Second, party supplies in our house is inadequate and may not sustain all the guests. (Please take note on your sentence structuring) But party is an exception. In addition, a good thing in my house without having to go back home after the party. >> In addition, one good thing in celebrating parties in my house is that I don\'t need to go back home after the party. (Please take note on your sentence structuring) But party is an exception. Immediately i can rest.>> I can rest immediately.  And I being able to decorate the house with friends. It is fun.>> And I am able to decorate my house with my friends. It is fun! (Nice sentence!) As soon as Christmas come and want to party.>> As soon as we celebrate Christmas, people can come and have some party. Of course, even better if I seems boyfriend. ^.^;;;>> It would be better if I see my boyfriend in the party. Good bye:) >> Correct

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