hello teacher!

2013-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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hi teacher i'm [이름]. i'm looking foward to starting our class. sometimes, I take a nap before class. but I think it is good to awake in that time. I'm feeling sleepy. because I watched the soccer match in midnight. but i try to awake. sleeping make me sleepy. maybe, it has some momentum..... and! here is my home work. It's very tricky. word's world is very enormous. I know teacher gives me an word every day. every time when i get the letter, which I'd never seen before. I try remebering everyday word~. Q1 - Which is correct? Independence Q2 - Which is correct? Abstinence Q3 - Which is correct? Annoyance Q4 - Which is correct? Divergence Q5 - Which is correct? Performance Q6 - Which is correct? Romance Q7 - Which is correct? Insurance Q8 - Which is correct? Conference Q9 - Which is correct? Reference Q10 - Which is correct? Difference

강사 첨삭

HI [이름]^^

Thank you for sending me your homework. I had fun reading it and I am glad that you are trying your best to explain your thoughts.Keep it up.You did a wonderful with your homework.You got a perfect score! I think the homework was easy for you. Please go over the corrections I gave you.Keep up the good work and aim higher.See you tomorrow!

Teacher Nina

Here are my corrections for you:

hi teacher i\'m [이름].

>> Hi teacher I\'m [이름].
i\'m looking foward to starting our class.

>> I\'m looking forward to start our class.
OR >> I always look forward to our class.

sometimes, I take a nap before class.

>> Sometimes, I take a nap before our class.

>> Or: I sometimes take a nap before our class.
but I think it is good to awake in that time.

>> But I think it is good to stay awake at that time,
I\'m feeling sleepy. because I watched the soccer match in midnight.

>> I feel sleepy because I watched a soccer match until midnight.
but i try to awake. sleeping make me sleepy.

>> But I try to stay awake even though I am sleepy.
maybe, it has some momentum.....

>> Did you mean: The class might have a momentum...
and! here is my home work.

>> And here is my homework.
It\'s very tricky. word\'s world is very enormous.

>> It was very tricky,words around the world are enormous.
I know teacher gives me an word every day.

>> I know my teacher gives me a word everyday.
every time when i get the letter, which I\'d never seen before.

>>Everytime I receive the letter which I\'ve never read before.
I try remebering everyday word~.
>> I try to remember each word everyday.
Q1 - Which is correct?
Independence
>> Correct!
Q2 - Which is correct?
Abstinence
>> Correct!
Q3 - Which is correct?
Annoyance
>> Correct!
Q4 - Which is correct?
Divergence
>> Correct!
Q5 - Which is correct?
Performance
>> Correct!
Q6 - Which is correct?
Romance
>> Correct!
Q7 - Which is correct?
Insurance
>> Correct!
Q8 - Which is correct?
Conference
>> Correct!
Q9 - Which is correct?
Reference
>> Correct!
Q10 - Which is correct?
Difference

>> Correct!

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