hello Teacher!!!

2013-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Belle

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Dear T. Giselle Good Mornning!!! I'm so sorry for my absence. I had to do overtime last week and weekend for prepareing buseness trip of my boss. I have to do overtime like this 3-4times a year. I will postpone class next time. I would to be in class but I was finlly late for one. I've known that my passion is not strong against my condition and weather. My condition is still not good. Anyway, I will be in class tommorrow. See you !!

강사 첨삭

Hello there! ^^

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

I know that you are quite busy so I appreciate the effort that you extended just to write this one.

I hope that you are doing fine.

Take care of yourself since the weather is unpredictable.

I hope that I will be able to see you then.

Thank you! ^^

T. Giselle^^ 

 Dear T. Giselle
>> CORRECT (proper punctuation)
Good Mornning!!!
>> CORRECT (proper capitalization/spelling)
I\'m so sorry for my absence.

>> CORRECT
I had to do overtime last week and weekend for prepareing buseness trip of my boss.

>> I had to do an overtime work last weekend to prepare for the business trip of my boss. 

I have to do overtime like this 3-4times a year.

>> CORRECT
I will postpone class next time.
>> I will postpone the class next time.
I would to be in class but I was finlly late for one.

>> I would like to be in this class but I\'m already late.
I\'ve known that my passion is not strong against my condition and weather.
>> I know that my passion is not strong against any conditions and the weather.
My condition is still not good.
>> CORRECT
Anyway, I will be in class tommorrow.
>> CORRECT [tomorrow]^^
See you !!

>> CORRECT

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