Hello teacher~
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Nice meet you agian. Does Glenda get a cold again? I hope that she is okay. Thank you for commending me. And your advice makes me relize one fact. It will be helpful to improve my English skill. Anyway Enjoy your weekend!
Here is my homework.
I would like to make my movie's title 'satisfaction' . Because whatever I do, I always persue the satisfaction of my life and meaningful thing. If something has no satisfaction and meaning for me, I easily lost interesting about that. So satisfaction is the most important thing for me. And I'd like to ask Will Smith to act my movie. He is my favorite actor and I am always impressed by his movie.
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Hi there!\",)_
Hope you are doing fine today. Thank you for doing your homework. You did a very good job, however you just need to work more or rather you just need to improve more on your sentence construction as well as on your grammar. I know that you did your best to make your homework and I really appreciate your unending effort and perseverance. Overall, you did great! Keep it up, I know you can do it! Smile!!! God Bless!!!
Let\'s hope that your teacher Glenda will get well soon.
Nice meet you agian.
>> Nice to meet you again.
Does Glenda get a cold again?
>> Correct!
>> OR: Did Glenda catch a cold again?
I hope that she is okay.
>> Correct!:) OR: I hope that she\'s doing fine.
Thank you for commending me.
>> Thank you for the nice compliment.
And your advice makes me relize one fact. It will be helpful to improve my English skill.
>> Your advice will absolutely help me improve my English skill.
Anyway Enjoy your weekend!
>> Anyway, enjoy your weekend.
>> OR: Have a great weekend.Here is my homework.>> Correct!I would like to make my movie\'s title \'satisfaction\' .
>> The title of my movie would be \"Satisfaction\".
Because whatever I do, I always persue the satisfaction of my life and meaningful thing.
>> I chose that title because, I want to pursue a meaningful life full of satisfaction.
If something has no satisfaction and meaning for me, I easily lost interesting about that.
>> In addition, if there\'s one thing that is not meaningful for me, I easily lost interest on it.
So satisfaction is the most important thing for me.
>> Correct!:)
>> OR: Thus, I consider satisfaction as the most important thing for me.
And I\'d like to ask Will Smith to act my movie. He is my favorite actor and I am always impressed by his movie.
>> Furthermore, I would like to ask Will Smith to portray/represent the movie, because he is my favorite actor and I\'m always inspired by his movies.
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