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2013-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hello teacher! Today I should go to buy some components for my computer. I may spend a lot of money ㅠㅠ Anyway thank you for commending me. That is very cheering me up. I will try to do my best. Have a nice day! Here is my homework. I think the most important perception in Korea is to have a confidence. No matter how someone do study well,iif he didn't get interview well, he would never get a job. Although I am very nervous, I should do my best and always try to have a confidence for myself. That is my creed, every time I am extremly nervous I try to have a confidence and it is always helpful for me. When it comes to job overseas, I don't know well. But may be it will work as same as in Korea.

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Hello there!!! ^^ I appreciate you doing a great job with your homework. I hope you\'ll keep up a great job! Have a great evening ahead. ^^   Hello teacher! >> CORRECT! Today I should go to buy some components for my computer. >> Today I should buy some components for my computer. I may spend a lot of money ㅠㅠ>> I might spend much money. Anyway thank you for commending me. >> Anyway, thank you for commending me. That is very cheering me up. >> That cheered me up so much. I will try to do my best. Have a nice day!>> CORRECT!Here is my homework.>> CORRECT!I think the most important perception in Korea is to have a confidence. >> I think the most important perception in Korea is to have confidence. No matter how someone do study well,iif he didn\'t get interview well, he would never get a job. >> No matter how a person studies very well if he didn\'t do well in his interview he will never get a job. Although I am very nervous, I should do my best and always try to have a confidence for myself. >> Although I am very nervous I should do my best and always try to have self-confidence. That is my creed, every time I am extremly nervous I try to have a confidence and it is always helpful for me. >> That is my creed, everytime I am extremely nervous I try to have confidence and it is always helpful. When it comes to job overseas, I don\'t know well. >> When it comes to job overseas, I don\'t know very well. >>OR: I don\'t know very well when it comes to job overseas. But may be it will work as same as in Korea. >> But maybe it works same as in Korea.

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