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It's frozen cold winter here.I think the global warming is the biggest cause of this strange weather condition.When I was young,it was cold for three days and warm for four days in winter,but these days cold weather is too long.I'm worrying about our children's future.All people should consider seriously about the circumstances of our precious earth.In Korea,from last year all big markets don't offer the disposable shopping vinyl so we have to prepare another shopping basket whenever we go shopping.At first it was a little inconvinent but I think this kind of a good campaign spread widely for keeping our natural circumstances.Have a nice week!!

Hi [이름],          This is a very good composition. You have a big concern for the environment. I hope everyone will think like you. See you tomorrow! -Sally-   It's frozen cold winter here. >> It's freezing cold because it is winter here. I think the global warming is the biggest cause of this strange weather condition. >>I think global warming is the biggest cause of this strange weather condition. When I was young, it was cold for three days and warm for four days in winter, but these days cold weather is too long. >>Correct >> When I was young, it was cold for three days and warm for four days during winter, but these days cold weather is too long. I'm worrying about our children's future. >>Correct All people should consider seriously about the circumstances of our precious earth. >> All people should seriously consider the circumstances of our precious earth. In Korea, from last year all big markets don't offer the disposable shopping vinyl so we have to prepare another shopping basket whenever we go shopping. >> In Korea, starting last year all big markets don't offer disposable shopping vinyl so we have to prepare another shopping basket whenever we go shopping. At first it was a little inconvinent but I think this kind of a good campaign spread widely for keeping our natural circumstances. >> At first it was a little inconvenient but I think this kind of a good campaign is spread widely for keeping our natural resources. Have a nice week!! >>Correct