Hello teacher

2014-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Hi~ Paula~~ I`m your student ㅋㅋ it`s break time now that`s why I can wirte letter to you I think I might be late today ㅠ.ㅠI`m sad,,, what are you doing anyway ? maybe you are ringing with your students. 아! why don`t you come to korea? I can guide for you save a lot of the money !!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^.^ Happy Thursday! ^^   I\'m your Teacher Paula. ^^ Nice to meet you! I wasn\'t able to answer your letter, because I had a private class. Why did you think you were late? Frankly speaking, I really want to go there. I just don\'t have enough money now. Hahaha ~~~ ^^ When I go there, I will gladly find you. ^^   Anyway, thanks for the information you gave me! ^^ See you soon! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Hi~ Paula~~ >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Hi Paula! >> OR: Hi Paula ~~~I`m your student ㅋㅋ>> I\'m your student. it`s break time now that`s why I can wirte letter to you>> It\'s my break time now that\'s why I can write a letter to you. I think I might be late today ㅠ.ㅠ >> I think I might be late today. I`m sad,,, >> I\'m sad. what are you doing anyway ?>>  What are you doing now? maybe you are ringing with your students.>> Maybe, you are ringing with your students. >> OR: You may be ringing with your students. 아! why don`t you come to korea? >> Why don\'t you come to Korea? I can guide for you>> I can guide you. >> OR: I can be your guide. save a lot of the money !!!! >> You can save a lot of money!!!

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