Hello teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ Paula~~
I`m your student ㅋㅋ
it`s break time now that`s why I can wirte letter to you
I think I might be late today ㅠ.ㅠI`m sad,,, what are you doing anyway ?
maybe you are ringing with your students.
아! why don`t you come to korea? I can guide for you
save a lot of the money !!!!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^.^
Happy Thursday! ^^
I\'m your Teacher Paula. ^^
Nice to meet you!
I wasn\'t able to answer your letter, because I had a private class.
Why did you think you were late?
Frankly speaking, I really want to go there.
I just don\'t have enough money now. Hahaha ~~~ ^^
When I go there, I will gladly find you. ^^
Anyway, thanks for the information you gave me! ^^
See you soon! ^^,
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Hi~ Paula~~
>> CORRECT!
>> BETTER: Hi Paula!
>> OR: Hi Paula ~~~I`m your student ㅋㅋ>> I\'m your student.
it`s break time now that`s why I can wirte letter to you>> It\'s my break time now that\'s why I can write a letter to you.
I think I might be late today ㅠ.ㅠ
>> I think I might be late today.
I`m sad,,,
>> I\'m sad.
what are you doing anyway ?>> What are you doing now?
maybe you are ringing with your students.>> Maybe, you are ringing with your students.
>> OR: You may be ringing with your students.
아! why don`t you come to korea?
>> Why don\'t you come to Korea?
I can guide for you>> I can guide you.
>> OR: I can be your guide.
save a lot of the money !!!!
>> You can save a lot of money!!!
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