hello! teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening, teacher!
You like a movie named 'The Notebook'?
I never heard of it , but it sound fun and mystery.
Today i am going to tell you about my future plan.
Every class i tell you that my parents always nags me alot
But my parents want the best for me , so i won't complain when they nags me
Now let's get down to our topic.
i am 15 years old,so in 5years i will go to college
I want to go police university it is hard to go there
but i will do my best and go to police university
I will learn French too,then i want to go France
maybe i can travel all around the world!
isn't it exciting plan?
after, i will volunteer for poor children
I want to help them right now, but i am too busy for that
so when I have a stable job and family
I can help them~
I will stop from here and i will talk to you again in our class later.
have a wonderful day~
ps. Do you have future plan?
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
You should make your dreams come true.
You are still young but learn how to pursue them.
I believe that you can do it.
You are a brilliant girl so, believe in yourself, too.
One of my future plans is to enjoy life more.
~Teacher Chloe
Good evening, teacher!
>>Correct!You like a movie named \'The Notebook\'?
>>Do you like the movie \"The Notebook?\".I never heard of it , but it sound fun and mystery.
>>I never heard of it, but it sounds fun and mysterious. Today i am going to tell you about my future plan.
>>Today, I am going to tell you about my future plan.Every class i tell you that my parents always nags me alot
>>I always tell you in our class that my parents nag me a lot. But my parents want the best for me , so i won\'t complain when they nags me
>>I know that they want the best for me so, I don\'t complain about it. Now let\'s get down to our topic.
>>Correct!i am 15 years old,so in 5years i will go to college
>>I am 15 years old now. Five years later, I will go to college. I want to go police university it is hard to go there
>>I want to go to the Police University. Although, it is hard to go there. but i will do my best and go to police university
>>But, I will do my best to enter there. I will learn French too,then i want to go France
>>I want to go to France so, I will learn French, too. maybe i can travel all around the world!
>>Maybe, I will travel all around the world. isn\'t it exciting plan?
>>Isn\'t it an exciting plan? after, i will volunteer for poor children
>>I will also volunteer for the poor children. I want to help them right now, but i am too busy for that
>>I want to help them right now, but I am too busy for it. so when I have a stable job and family I can help them~
>>So, when I have my own stable job and family, I would help them. I will stop from here and i will talk to you again in our class later.
>>I will stop from here and I will talk to you again in our class later.have a wonderful day~>>Have a wonderful day! ps. Do you have future plan?
>>Do you have a future plan?
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