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2016-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Good morning, teacher! In our last class, we talked about our culture but i can't tell you about it. because korea has alot culture First, i will tell you about korea traditional food The most popular food is [이름]chi when foriegner eat [이름]chi they says is very spicy food My brother doesn't want to eat [이름]chi however I love [이름]chi leave out [이름]chi there is bibimbap, bulgogi, duckuk etc... second , korea traditional cloth is hanbok it has beautiful color also it is very pretty third, about the culture we eat special food on each day. We call it "TTeok kuk" which is rice pasta soup, meaning we eat TTeok kuk getting one year older we often says if we eat TTeok kuk alot we will alot order It is funny story but my relative, or my brother belives it i will stop from here~ ps. what is your traditional food and cloth i want to know about it, also is there any fun story in your culture?

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The \"barong\" Tagalog or simply \"barong\" is a traditional attire from Philippines which is actually an embroidered formal garment used by both the Filipino men and women. It is a very lightweight garment which is highly feasible outfit for the humid and tropic climate of Philippines. Filipinos wear it not only for the formal dressing but also it is the most common traditional wedding costume in the Philippines. You may want to search for it so, you know how it looks like. Just like your traditional clothes, I can say that is beautiful, too. Anyway, enjoy the rest of your day, dear. I will call you again later. Hugs! ~Teacher Chloe Good morning, teacher! >>Correct! In our last class, we talked about our culture >>In our last class, we talked about our culture. (You should always put a period sign in every after a sentence.)but i can\'t tell you about it. because korea has alot culture >>I was not able to tell you about it because Korea\'s culture is rich. First, i will tell you about korea traditional food>>First, I am going to tell you about Korea\'s traditional food. The most popular food is [이름]chi >>The most popular food is \"[이름]chi\". when foriegner eat [이름]chi they says is very spicy food >>Foreigners say that it is a very spicy food. My brother doesn\'t want to eat [이름]chi however I love [이름]chi >>My brother doesn\'t like it. As for me, I love it.leave out [이름]chi there is bibimbap, bulgogi, duckuk etc...>>Aside from \"[이름]chi\" there are a lot more of our traditional food. second , korea traditional cloth is hanbok >>Second, I am going to tell you about the Korea\'s traditional clothes, the \"hanbok\". it has beautiful color also it is very pretty >>It has a beautiful color. Also, it is very pretty. third, about the culture we eat special food on each day. >>Third, we eat special food on special ocassions. We call it \"TTeok kuk\" which is rice pasta soup, meaning we eat TTeok kuk >>We call it \"tteoguk\', a rice pasta soup. getting one year older >>We eat it on our birthdays. we often says if we eat TTeok kuk alot we will alot order >>It is our belief that if we eat a lot of it, we will have more years to live.   It is funny story but my relative, or my brother belives it >>It is funny but my family and relatives believe it.i will stop from here~ >>I will stop from here. ps. what is your traditional food and cloth >>What is your traditional food and clothes? i want to know about it, also is there any fun story in your culture? >>I want to know about it. Do you also have a funny culture in your country?  

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