Hello teacher~
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon, teacher!
Today, My vacation is over so i went to school
I was so happy to meet my friends when i saw them they were all changed
Like i thought everyone has changed physically
I think my classmate is nice
We had a great time.
We laugh together, study together
Today ,It's school start day so everyone thought that we are not gonna study
However we had a class today we learn english, korean and history
It was horrible
In english class we studied vocabulary word
And she said we will have a test tomorrow
Everyone jeers at her
In korean class we riview what we learned before the vacation
Also we talked about our vacation
In history class we just played
Also we had story telling time
He talled about history this was the greatest class
I think vacation is nice but going to school is nice too
I will stop from here~
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Good afternoon to you, dear!
I am so happy to hear from you that your first day of school went fine.
Going to school can sometimes be tiring but exciting as well.
Learning new things at school is really great!
So, always enjoy your time at school.
~Teacher Chloe
Good afternoon, teacher!
>>Correct! Today, My vacation is over so i went to school
>>My vacation is just over so, I went to school today.I was so happy to meet my friends when i saw them they were all changed
>>I was so happy when I met my friends. They have changed a lot. Like i thought everyone has changed physically
>>Just like what I have thought, everyone physically changed. I think my classmate is nice
>>I think that my classmate is nice.
OR:
>>I think that my classmates are nice. We had a great time.
>>Correct!We laugh together, study together
>>We laughed and studied together. Today ,It\'s school start day so everyone thought that we are not gonna study
>>Today was our first day of class so, we thought that we will not have formal classes yet. However we had a class today we learn english, korean and history
>>However, we had our classes in English, Korean, and History today.It was horrible
>>It was horrible. In english class we studied vocabulary word>>In our English class, we studied vocabulary words.
And she said we will have a test tomorrow
>>Our teacher announced that we will have a test tomorrow.Everyone jeers at her
>>Everyone jeered at her. In korean class we riview what we learned before the vacation
>>In our Korean class, we reviewed what we have learned last semester. Also we talked about our vacation
>>Also, we talked about our vacation. In history class we just played
>>In our History class, we just played. Also we had story telling time
>>Also, we had story telling time. He talled about history this was the greatest class>>Our teacher discussed about history. This was the greatest class I had today.
I think vacation is nice but going to school is nice too
>>I think that having a vacation is nice but going to school is even nicer. I will stop from here~
>>I will stop from here.
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