hello teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon teacher!
Today it's raining cats and dogs
I think weathers is getting cooler
I can feel the cool wind
After our class I will go to my grandparent's house
Because it's ancestral rites (in korea we say jesa)
It's a ceremony held every year to mark the day of someone's passing
Actully today is my great grandfather's ancestral rites
I never saw him
Because he passed away before i got born
I think my grand mother really misses him
He is her father
Now my mom and aunt is cooking for the amcestral rites
They are cooking Jeon(korea food), fish etc.
I think this ceremony is kind of tradition in korea
Do you think they really come from the sky? and eat what we made?
I don't know the answer
But some of my friend said when day was having ancestral rites
Some smoke came in to the house
and stay on the table
I really surprised about that
Maybe i can see my great grandfather today
Now i will stop from here~ see you in our class
PS.do you belive they really come?
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I am sure that you are having a good time right now.
You must be eating a lot of delicious food.
Anyway, I am not sure about it.
Whether I believe it or not, I respect your friends\' beliefs.
I cannot really tell because I haven\'t experienced it.
Enjoy the your weekend!
Have a fabulous one, dear!
~Teacher Chloe
Good afternoon teacher!
>>Correct! Today it\'s raining cats and dogs
>>Today, it\'s raining cats and dogs. I think weathers is getting cooler
>>I think the wether is getting cool. I can feel the cool wind
>>I can feel the cool wind. After our class I will go to my grandparent\'s house>>After our class, I will go to my grandparents\' house.
Because it\'s ancestral rites (in korea we say jesa)
>>I will go there because it is my great grandfather\'s death anniversary. It\'s a ceremony held every year to mark the day of someone\'s passing
Because it\'s ancestral rites (in korea we say jesa) Actully today is my great grandfather\'s ancestral rites
>>We do it every year to remember our late great grandfather. I never saw him
>>I never saw him. Because he passed away before i got born>>He passed away before I was born.
I think my grand mother really misses him
>>I think my grandmother really misses him. He is her father
>>He is her father. Now my mom and aunt is cooking for the amcestral rites
>>My mom and aunt are cooking some food right now.
OR:
>>My mother and aunt are cooking some food right now. They are cooking Jeon(korea food), fish etc.
>>They are cooking some Korean traditional food. I think this ceremony is kind of tradition in korea
>>This ceremony is a tradition in our country.
OR:>>It is a ceremony that is commonly practiced in our country. Do you think they really come from the sky? and eat what we made?>>Do you think they really come from sky, be with us and eat what we have prepared?
I don\'t know the answer
>>I don\'t know the answer. But some of my friend said when day was having ancestral rites Some smoke came in to the house and stay on the table
>>Some of my friends told me that while they are having the ancestral rite, smoke went into their houses and stayed on their tables. I really surprised about that
>>I was really surprised about it. Maybe i can see my great grandfather today>>Maybe, I will see my great grandfather today.
Now i will stop from here~ see you in our class
>>I will stop from here. See you in our class. PS.do you belive they really come?
>>Do you believe that they are really with us when we do the ancestral rite?
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