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2016-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Hello, teacher~! Today i was really tired because i had to do the school project by my self It's was group project but my group didn't do any thing so i had to do it my self maybe before our class i think i need to sleep anyway my school product was we had to make ucc so, my group taked a picture an video actully in our group they really enoyed maybe if i did it and made it all i will show to you also teacher about school president i am so nervous about it another volunteer is super.duper awesome i think i have to be super duper awesome sorry i am so tired i didn't write long see you in our class

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Hi, [이름]!   Thank you for sharing this with me. I\'ll be waiting for the outcome of your project. ^^ Anyway, cheer up! Don\'t worry too much about the election. Your friends are helping so there will be a good result. ^^   _Teacher Dianne   Hello, teacher~! >> CorrectToday i was really tired because i had to do the school project by my self. >> Today I was really tired because i had to do the school project by myself.It\'s was group project but my group didn\'t do any thing so i had to do it my self>> It was a group project but my group members didn\'t do any thing so I had to do it myself. maybe before our class i think i need to sleep>> Maybe I need to sleep before our class. anyway my school product was we had to make ucc so, my group taked a picture an videoactully in our group they really enoyed >> Anyway, we have to make a UCC video for our school project so my group took a picture and a video and our group enjoyed it.maybe if i did it and made it all i will show to you >> Maybe if I\'m done with it, I will show to you.also teacher about school president i am so nervous about it another volunteer is super.duper awesome>> And about the school president election, I am so nervous about it because another volunteer or candidate is awesome. i think i have to be super duper awesome >> I think I have to be more awesome.sorry i am so tired i didn\'t write long see you in our class >> Sorry I didn\'t write long because I\'m tired. I\'ll see you in class.

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