Hello teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher~!
Today i was really tired
because i had to do the school project by my self
It's was group project but my group didn't do any thing
so i had to do it my self
maybe before our class i think i need to sleep
anyway my school product was we had to make ucc
so, my group taked a picture an video
actully in our group they really enoyed
maybe if i did it
and made it all i will show to you
also teacher about school president i am so nervous about it
another volunteer is super.duper awesome
i think i have to be super duper awesome
sorry i am so tired i didn't write long see you in our class
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing this with me.
I\'ll be waiting for the outcome of your project. ^^
Anyway, cheer up! Don\'t worry too much about the election.
Your friends are helping so there will be a good result. ^^
_Teacher Dianne
Hello, teacher~!
>> CorrectToday i was really tired because i had to do the school project by my self.
>> Today I was really tired because i had to do the school project by myself.It\'s was group project but my group didn\'t do any thing so i had to do it my self>> It was a group project but my group members didn\'t do any thing so I had to do it myself.
maybe before our class i think i need to sleep>> Maybe I need to sleep before our class.
anyway my school product was we had to make ucc so, my group taked a picture an videoactully in our group they really enoyed
>> Anyway, we have to make a UCC video for our school project so my group took a picture and a video and our group enjoyed it.maybe if i did it and made it all i will show to you
>> Maybe if I\'m done with it, I will show to you.also teacher about school president i am so nervous about it another volunteer is super.duper awesome>> And about the school president election, I am so nervous about it because another volunteer or candidate is awesome.
i think i have to be super duper awesome
>> I think I have to be more awesome.sorry i am so tired i didn\'t write long see you in our class
>> Sorry I didn\'t write long because I\'m tired. I\'ll see you in class.
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